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Saturday, 15. November 2025

Renga in Blue

Madhouse: Trolls

(Continued from my previous posts on Madhouse.) I’m likely not far from the end, but that doesn’t mean it’ll be easy to get there. Last time I left off on the very simple problem of being able to press a button on a wall. (LOOK BUTTON says there is no button here, so I wasn’t … … Continue reading →

(Continued from my previous posts on Madhouse.)

I’m likely not far from the end, but that doesn’t mean it’ll be easy to get there.

Via an Asylum II ad in 80 Microcomputing Magazine, May 1982.

Last time I left off on the very simple problem of being able to press a button on a wall. (LOOK BUTTON says there is no button here, so I wasn’t even sure if it was a button.)

PRESS BUTTON and PUSH BUTTON did not work. I did discover while fiddling that VOCABULARY works just like Asylum so you can get a full list of verbs and nouns.

open, run, throw, take, chop, scream, put, insert, ignite, fart, push, help, shout, remove, lock, shut, look, charge, press, knock, drop, unlock, fill, eat, give, get, yell, leave, light, close

box, mirror, fuse, inmate, door, cord, wall, coin, Glass wall, button, guard, apple, gold, red, blue, magic map, contact mine, speak and spell, firework rocket, fluid, passkey, silver key, green key, cube, map, mine, gun powder, rocket, golden lighter, pass, silv, gree, gold coins, truncheon, transporter, new fuse, bottle, lighter, gold key, blue key, red key, coins, geranium, trans, blown fuse, lighter fluid

Even with this list I was having no luck (I went as far as guessing it was a HOLE instead of a button and trying things like INSERT GREEN KEY IN HOLE). Fortunately, Gus Brasil, who seemingly gravitates to the really obscure stuff I play, picked up the game and played all the way to the end. He let me know the right syntax is PUSH BUTTON ON WALL. Argh!

The syntax becomes relevant again shortly.

I was thus able to enact my plan: light a rocket, drop it at the guard, run to the steel walls, survive the explosion, and get past the guard to a new area.

The box the guard leaves behind has a rubber truncheon. You can also go all the way to the end of the four doors and use the green key to find a purse with some gold coins.

I already suspected the truncheon went to the mined area (either smashing a glass wall or a mirror) but I’ll save that for later and deal with the gold coins first, which directly go to an inmate near the start who wanted to trade them for a fuse.

Again, every character that isn’t a guard can be referred to as an INMATE.

With this, I was able to go to the transporter and … still not operate it. It was described as having a button on it, it had a fuse in a “fuseholder”, and it was too heavy to cart around (you can pick it up, but you have to drop it in place). The key turned out to be the highly (highly) unusual syntax which has you PUSH BUTTON ON TRANSPORTER.

Doing this fries the fuse, which is why we needed the New Fuse in the first place (I had originally thought the lack of working was the fuse, not the parser being finicky). This was followed by an incredibly long struggle with the parser to try to take the “Blown Fuse” out, and put the “New Fuse” in. GET BLOWN FUSE doesn’t work, nor did most of the variants I tried. (“GET BLOWN FUSE FROM TRANSPORTER”: “You can’t do that”.) The big issue on top of everything else is that the parser has a character limit so you can’t type in anything you want. If you try to TAKE BLOWN FUSE FROM TRANSPORTER you get stuck by not being able to type in the “R”. Trying to use REMOVE (off the verb list) is even worse:

This is the first time I’ve ever had difficulty with a parser because it refuses to type all the characters I need for a command. Gus Brasil mentioned (based on the Vocab list) that TRANS works as an abbreviation, and indeed it does: REMOVE BLOWN FUSE FROM TRANS gets the much desired Blown Fuse.

But things aren’t over yet because now I needed to put in the new one, which was another saga in itself, and I actually took a break from the puzzle and went exploring a little in case I missed stuff. Gus also incidentally pointed out that the teleport-to-nowhere I found which kept repeating had a clear message if you do the map-upside down:

This is exactly like troll levels in Mario Maker.

Finally being satisfied that I had everything resolved (except the truncheon, which I’m saving) I went back to the grind:

put new fuse
put new fuse in trans
insert new fuse in trans
put new fuse in fuseholder
insert new fuse in fuseholder

This wasn’t a problem with guess the verb or even guess the noun, but guess the preposition. The game needs “into”: INSERT NEW FUSE INTO TRANS.

There was one small benefit from all that fiddling. At one point I typed OPEN BOX rather than my usual command (I had PUT NEW FUSE which seemingly worked, but only set the item down). I discovered that the square also contained a silver key.

You can’t move off the square without dropping the transporter (again, too heavy, so it always would look like there is a box there no matter what). The silver key is being hidden by the property of the game always displaying a single box for any item being in a spot, no matter how many items there are. If anything in this game is a troll at the level of what a fangame normally does (rather than a professional game) this is it: this is the kind of glitch in reality that most authors try to hide (and as far as I remember, never got used by Corr/Denman) but the exact conditions here (you have to drop an item on the square to turn around and look at it, you can’t see a box in the square you are standing) are being exploited by a superfan to their limit. Compare with Super Mario romhacks that require using glitches to beat:

Moving on, as we still haven’t explored the area the transporter lands on:

It’s fairly straightforward except for yet another troll, which is somewhat dependent on the player’s keyboarding. They have to wind their way out a “wormy” passage, followed by a very long passage where one step before the end you need to turn left. This means you are hitting the “up” key a lot, and if you accidentally hit “up” one too many times you plunge into a pit. I didn’t have this happen since I was moving slow to make a map, but since I could tell what the author was aiming for, I made an animation demonstrating the fall:

The bottom of the pit has infinite hallways in any direction. You have to reload. (Again: The original Corr games did have some softlocks, but not of the kind where you realize you are in an impossible room or area.)

Turning correctly, you can make it over to pick up a magic map, which is the only other item here. Normally then this would be a jump back to where you started, followed by a trip up to the mined floor, but…

…it doesn’t land you back at the same place you started! (I marked the landing point as the swirly wormhole.) I’ve also simplified the map a bit here, as there’s some teleporters that loop you around (and I didn’t feel the need to find the exact positioning for each one) and I’ve also left off marking most of the doors, some which use a gold key (which we haven’t found yet); just note you need to come back here once you have the gold key in order to pick up the red key.

After some major map-fiddling I found the “escape” door (a door seen from the other side, but requiring a silver key to open) so finally made it back to the elevator and the mined level, with the truncheon and magic map in hand. I already knew the magic map was relevant because when examining it at first, it gives the same grid as before. Once you actually arrive there, a path is drawn out like this:

Clearly my own map was turned from the “real” compass the game was using (I hate not knowing how to orient things, grr) so I did some magic with Microsoft Paint in order to redraw the route on my original map.

To get through to the route in the first place involves busting the mirror. I had some difficulty because the typical HIT and SMASH and ATTACK weren’t in the list, so I had to go with CHOP. Chopping with a truncheon?

The path then follows mostly uneventfully as long as you don’t typo your keypress. There’s also a “big blue nothing with a button on the rear side” but that’s again just trolling, and to get through the last step you should look in the box as it contains a contact mine which needs to be picked up (don’t step on it!). In the end you can reach the corner box which has a gold key.

The route is changed on the way back, so you need to refer to the magic map (or do a lot of saving and loading) to make it to safety.

In the end I wasn’t too annoyed by the fact I mapped it first before finding a relevant item, as knowing the boundaries helped make sure I did the path correctly.

With the gold key in hand you can head back and get the red key, and then go on a spree of opening doors. This yields a Speak and Spell, a germanium, a botanist (who doesn’t want a shriveled germanium and kicks you out if you try to give it over), and John Carpenter, the director (in a room marked “Director”). Seriously:

This would be after he made The Thing, but I don’t know what that means for the game. I tried GIVE for every item I had and got no reaction.

The only other open area I have is back where I blew up the guard; there’s a second guard blocking the way further, and it seems like they need to be removed out of the way as well. You can step back and throw the contact mine, then throw an item at the contact mine to blow it up, but that blows you up as well.

Guard #2.

After throwing the contact mine to be next to the guard.

After THROW TRUNCHEON. You can’t throw farther.

So that leaves the botanist (and maybe getting a non-withered version of the plant over), the director, and the guard to deal with. I still have an empty wine bottle (the flower can’t go in it) and a Speak and Spell but I’m otherwise out of options.

Gus, you’re welcome to drop hints but ROT13 only please. Based on the vocabulary list there isn’t much left to find. Anyone else is welcome to speculate about wacky stuff to try and I’ll test it out.

No cereal boxes in the vocabulary, unfortunately. COME BACK ALI. COME BACK ALI’S SISTER.

Friday, 14. November 2025

Renga in Blue

Madhouse: Little Red Nothing Looking Very Sad

Never have I felt more apprehension than reading this sentence There are no hints or clues anywhere because there is no documentation that this game ever even existed. about a game related to Deathmaze 5000. — Matt W. in the comments of my first post about Madhouse One of the disadvantages to a write-as-I-play style … … Continue reading →

Never have I felt more apprehension than reading this sentence

There are no hints or clues anywhere because there is no documentation that this game ever even existed.

about a game related to Deathmaze 5000.

— Matt W. in the comments of my first post about Madhouse

One of the disadvantages to a write-as-I-play style is that I don’t get to plunge into the hex machine code until I’m done (or at least I get really, really, stuck); Rob in the comments searched through and found a copyright notice which explains quite a bit and also makes the whole experience even more terrifying. Previously I theorized this could be a “hacked” game but special tools were needed that didn’t exist at this time to do the kind of work required here. It appears a madlad from Germany custom-made his own.

ADVLIB Copyright (c) 1982/83 Eberhard Mattes

Eberhard Mattes was a Video Genie enthusiast and has his name linked to some “monitor software” which tracks what’s going on in machine code and a bios to use CP/M on Video Genie. The copyright statement above implies he made his own fangame program to modify the machine code of the Frank Corr engine. Without any other name attached I’m going to guess this game is likely by Mattes himself. (It could even be the tool ADVLIB never got released, just the game made with it.) I’m not clear yet which game was the “base” but the verb FART is included and only showed up in the first two (Deathmaze 5000 and Labyrinth) and the screen layout is closer to those games; the inmate graphics and some other elements only show up starting in Asylum.

Mattes appears to be the same person who later went to the University of Stuttgart and worked on TeX libraries for OS/2.

Fangames often are harder and less fair than the originals of a game; the enthusiasts who have played through a game multiple times really want a challenge and/or to torment their friends. For example, the “troll levels” so now well-refined through the Super Mario Maker games are their own ecosystem far from the ethos of Nintendo-designed levels.

You might ask, how could a Deathmaze 5000 style game be less fair than the original? You’ll see.

Continuing from last time…

…I had traded some gun powder for a bottle and a firework rocket (the rocket indicates it has a cord if you LOOK at it). I also had in my inventory a green key (used everywhere I could manage), lighter fluid, and a golden lighter (which I had filled with the aforementioned fluid). On the obstacle side of things, there was an inmate who wanted five gold coins for a fuse, a “transporter” that seems to need aforementioned fuse, a guard that stops me on level 1, a place where steel “protective” doors fall on level 1, and (still unexplored as of my last post) I had a teleporter square to get through and a mine-laden level 3.

I’m going to do the teleporter first (which will be short), then the mine area (which will be frustrating), and finally the guard and the steel doors (which are connected).

After stepping into the teleporter and turning “south”.

I don’t have much to say about the teleporter area; it drops you in a region which “loops” the west to the east side and seems intended to just make you walk forever if you don’t notice what’s going on. I dropped items (which left behind boxes) to confirm the area is endless. Mind you, Deathmaze had something trigger with particular turn numbers in a static room, so there may be something to this area still, but I have no clues pointing here yet.

There is also the possibility there is something on one of the random walls (I have yet to face each and every one to check); there’s a wall with a special object on level 3 (the mined floor) as you’ll see next.

Arriving in the elevator to level 3 and turning “north”.

The level is mostly divided into a grid pattern, where the outermost circle is mine-free, but there are many dangerous squares that will blow you up if you step inside the grid.

The mines are hopefully self-explanatory (they’re invisible, I had to step on every single one to map them); some other points on the map above:

1. There are many doors marked “elevator”. Only the door you came in on is a real elevator; walking into any of the other “elevator” rooms lets you know the room is fake, and it drops you down into a 1 by 1 room with no apparent means of escape. This seems to be a softlock.

None of the Corr games had this kind of softlock; one reason why this one is more unfair.

2. In the upper right corner there’s a visible box, but it is blocked by glass walls to the west and south. I have been unable to break through the wall, even when using FART from all the way across the map, flying towards it, and ramming. (Before anyone asks, it doesn’t work to bypass mines either.) Animation below:

3. There are two squares marked “NOTHING”. Those are boxes, and when you open them, the game describes that you have found nothing. You are unable to take nothing. They are pure trolling. (Again, a few steps past anything Corr did, although he did have red herrings in Deathmaze.)

4. There’s one wall (the only place where the grid breaks) with a mirror. I haven’t been able to get anything useful to happen here but it does indicate looking at particular walls might be needed (meaning I need to comb over every area very carefully).

The map is no doubt incomplete since I haven’t made it to the inner area yet. My guess is I’ll bust past the glass wall (somehow) which will then give access, and I also guess that the box in the upper right corner has NOTHING just like the others. You might think the firework rocket would be helpful for the glass. Unfortunately, it’s a little too explosive; you can light the cord, drop it, and run away, but it always makes a big enough explosion to (presumably) smash the glass but also kill the player.

Now, the level with the guards. There’s not much to it at the start other than the guard telling you to go back to your cell…

…and the steel wall…

…but notice how it is protective. And we have a very powerful rocket. There’s enough time while the cord burns to drop the rocket next to the guard and make a beeline for the wall.

The wall that dropped has what looks like a button.

Unfortunately, I haven’t been able to press it! I might need to do some serious noun-hunting (again, this is a little more unfair than what Corr did). It could even be a “hole” rather than a button or some such nonsense. If there was a way to look at the wall that might help but the obvious candidates (LOOK WALL, LOOK STEEL WALL, LOOK AROUND) give no joy, and plain LOOK BUTTON says “I see no button.”

Enough events have happened this seemed like a good time to report in, at least. I don’t think this is going to go as long as the Asylum games but we’ll see.


Zarf Updates

I am a person who will buy... another... Steam Machine

Another Valve hardware announcement: the Steam Machine is back. I am immediately and predictably on board for it. You might wonder what kind of idiot I am. Let's review my history with Steam hardware: 2015: Get excited about the original Steam ...

Another Valve hardware announcement: the Steam Machine is back. I am immediately and predictably on board for it.

You might wonder what kind of idiot I am. Let's review my history with Steam hardware:

Clearly, I will buy the new Steam companion cube, stare at it for ten minutes, and shove it in a closet next to the original 2015 Steam rectangular solid. Right?

Maybe. See, Valve isn't consistently screwing up. They keep fixing their mistakes.

The mistake of the original (2015) Steam Machine was that it didn't seamlessly play Windows games. Valve then went all-in on Proton/WINE, and now the Steam Deck plays everything. Solved.

The only thing wrong with the Steam Deck is that it's heavy, bulky, the battery life is crap, and the screen is tiny... Okay, that's four things, but plenty of people clearly don't care. The Deck is a successful toy. I only notice because I'm comparing to my iPad, which is hard to beat.

And then...

Here's the thing. I have a lovely rec room upstairs. Cozy couch, big TV. (Okay, small TV by modern standards.) But I don't watch much TV since the channels all went subscription-only. A little, but not much. So the room is sad and lonely most of the time.

Aha, I thought! I will get a Steam Deck Dock, attach the unused Deck to the TV, find a controller, and make that my gaming room! The Deck's screen and battery life don't matter if it's perma-docked.

Well, it turns out that my smallish TV doesn't work great with the Deck. The TV is so old that it doesn't have gamma adjustment for HDMI in. SteamOS doesn't have gamma adjustment for HDMI out. And I was trying to play Soul Reaver 2 (for reasons), and that's also ancient, and the upshot was unplayably dark.

So that plan sort of fell through, but it wasn't Valve's fault. Entirely. I do plan to get a big dumb gamma-adjustable TV for Winterfair, and then -- couch-gaming!

...So do I really need a New Steam Machine? No, but I'll get one anyway. It'll have way more crunch than my (first-gen) Deck.

I might as well get a New Steam Controller while I'm at it. I currently use a selection of rattly (and drifty) Xbox 360 USB controllers. They're light and they never complain about battery life, but if I'm buying into Valve's package, I'm buying in.

(I got an original Steam Controller with the original Machine. It has one thumb-stick. The new one has two, which is the right number. See what I mean about Valve fixing their mistakes?)

Of course this is all subject to price, which Valve has not announced. Price will be their most important leverage against Sony and Xbox -- everyone waits with bated breath. Except me, because I gave up on the big console rat race years ago. I just want a moderately priced box that runs Windows games and I don't have to think about its insides.

I admit that I am tempted by the addressable LED strip. I started a LED-strip project a couple of years ago, but I never got it to hardware.


You are now going to ask about the Steam Frame, a.k.a. "VR will catch on, this time for sure!" Or, I suppose Valve would say: "Facebook's Quest can eat my shorts."

I admit I thought about it. For about a minute. (Longer than I thought about the Apple set.) But the fact is that there's only one game that I want to play in VR, and it wouldn't take that long to finish. Then what? Replay Myst? Again?

Whoops, I'm wrong: two VR games now. Still. Not worth buying hardware.

I'll repeat the offer I always make: sell me just the hand controllers, and a way to play those games on a regular monitor, and I will buy them like a shot.

Thursday, 13. November 2025

Choice of Games LLC

“Hunter: The Reckoning — A Time of Monsters” is out now! Topple the vampires from the streets below!

In partnership with World of Darkness and Paradox Interactive, Choice of Games is proud to announce the release of Hunter: The Reckoning — A Time of Monsters by Paul C. Wang, now available on Steam, iOS, and Android. It’s 20% off until November 20th! Paul’s earlier games Mecha Ace, The Hero of Kendrickstone, The Cryptkeepers of Hallowford, and Choice of Broadsides: HMS Foraker are on sa

In partnership with World of Darkness and Paradox Interactive, Choice of Games is proud to announce the release of Hunter: The Reckoning — A Time of Monsters by Paul C. Wang, now available on Steam, iOS, and Android.

It’s 20% off until November 20th!

Paul’s earlier games Mecha Ace, The Hero of Kendrickstone, The Cryptkeepers of Hallowford, and Choice of Broadsides: HMS Foraker are on sale as well!

Topple the vampires from the streets below! Will you unite the homeless, the gangs, and the secret hunter societies to defy vampiric rule?

Hunter: The Reckoning — A Time of Monsters is an interactive novel by Paul Wang, set in the World of Darkness, where your choices control the story. It’s entirely text-based, 1 million words and hundreds of choices, without graphics or sound effects, and fueled by the vast, unstoppable power of your imagination.

Welcome to the Downtown Eastside, a place Vancouver has tried its best to forget. Sandwiched between the steel and glass towers of the financial district and the gentrified tourist playground of the new harbor, the human detritus of the city keeps getting squeezed into a smaller and smaller box. Dispossessed, trampled, ignored…It will only take the right spark to set the fury ablaze.

Down on your luck, you’ve found yourself in a homeless encampment here. When a vampire masquerading as a cop attacks you, the misery of Downtown Eastside takes on a whole new dimension. Suddenly, you have a place to direct your rage: the world of shadow that preys upon the misery of your new neighbors.

But this first glimpse is just that: a first glimpse. A gash in the fabric of reality as you knew it. Soon, you find yourself torn between the street gangs of the Downtown Eastside, RMCP special ops, a coterie of Thin Blooded vampires, multiple secret hunter societies, and the Chinese Triads. The shadow world just goes deeper and deeper, and it seems like someone is ready and willing to betray you at every turn. Of course, each of them has something to offer you: a home, a job, a career? Money, glory, vengeance, or immortality?

Despite these temptations, you are not alone. In the short time that you’ve been here, you’ve met the fiercest defenders of humanity: your neighbors. You did not expect to find the camaraderie of the Downtown Eastside to be so strong, but now that you’re here, you can’t imagine anything else. Together, can you and your new friends stand against the darkness? When the time comes, will you sacrifice yourself for your community, or will you choose to become one more bloodsucking predator of the night?

  • Play as male, female, or nonbinary; gay, straight, or bi
  • Scrounge for food, weapons, and allies in the back alleys of Vancouver’s Downtown Eastside
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  • Help your found family to make peace with their inner demons, or manipulate them for your own ends
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Hunted, broke, and homeless, your nights seem numbered. They have everything. You only have your guts, your wits, and a stubborn refusal to die.

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Wednesday, 12. November 2025

Zarf Updates

Towers of Pen: puzzle experiences that zoom out and out

My ThinkyCon 2025 talk is now posted! Towers of Pen: puzzle experiences that zoom out and out The talk in text form (link) The slides by themselves (PDF, 13 Mb) The recorded video from November 6th (via ThinkyCon's Youtube channel) The video ...

My ThinkyCon 2025 talk is now posted!

Towers of Pen: puzzle experiences that zoom out and out

The video includes a couple of audience questions, but it also includes me saying "um" a lot. Take your pick, take your chances.


By the way, I've now written this talk twice. When I wrote it up to present live, I wrote my notes in spoken English. For the web page, I rewrote it all in written English.

Of course the spoken version was a bit improvised. But even if I'd read directly from my written notes (which I never would, that sucks) it wouldn't have been identical to the text essay. Because nobody speaks written English.

A sample comparison:

Spoken Zarf:

Which reminds me of the metroidbrania moment of “I didn’t realize I could do this, but it was there all along, hidden in plain sight.” Not the same structure, but the same feeling. Which maybe explains why I am obsessed with both of these tropes.

Written Zarf:

The feeling is analogous to (though not identical to) the “metroidbrainia” moment: “I didn’t realize I could take this action, but it was always available -- hidden in plain sight.” This might explain why I am obsessed with both of these tropes.

When I'm talking, I happily string together sentence fragments. It moves the paragraph along and nobody cares. When I'm writing, okay, I'm still pretty loose about sentence structure. But I think a lot more about paragraph structure, because I'm thinking about the text in larger chunks -- and I expect you-the-reader will too.


Renga in Blue

Madhouse (1981?)

We have — or at least had — the early timeline of Med Systems well-understood. They were founded by William Denman out of North Carolina, and they were the ones responsible for Reality Ends (1980) Deathmaze 5000 (1980) Labyrinth (1980) Asylum (1981) Asylum II (1982) the latter four being first-person “blobber adventure” style games with … … Continue reading ͛

We have — or at least had — the early timeline of Med Systems well-understood.

They were founded by William Denman out of North Carolina, and they were the ones responsible for

Reality Ends (1980)
Deathmaze 5000 (1980)
Labyrinth (1980)
Asylum (1981)
Asylum II (1982)

the latter four being first-person “blobber adventure” style games with an engine by Frank Corr, Jr.

Consolidating the information from Will Moczarski, Ernst Krogtoft, and a 1981 interview, Frank Corr was an 18-year-old student at MIT when he used his TRS-80 to make the game Rat’s Revenge in BASIC. Denman saw a copy and offered to publish it. While Corr didn’t originally write the game to sell, he agreed to a deal, as long as he was able to “learn machine language first.” (He managed to parley writing a research paper for English into one about machine language.)

During MIT’s summer break, Corr went back to make a machine code version of Rat’s Revenge, and followed up by adding enough content it went from straightforward maze game to an adventure game: Deathmaze 5000. (This started as a true outsider whim: he had never played an adventure until he was halfway through making Deathmaze.) This same engine was used (with collaboration by William Denman himself) for a follow-up, Labyrinth. All three were out by October.

In January 1981, he made improvements to a routine “that allows graphics to be stored as data”, leading to the more elaborate game Asylum (out by the release of their Spring 1981 catalog). Corr also claimed (post-Asylum) that he was going to write one more game with “octagonal rooms” and “use a space station or similar setting.” Corr is only credited on Asylum II with the “graphics”, so he apparently either relaxed on game development to focus on MIT or switched to working on the space station game (which never came out).

There are three other lost Med Systems we know about from the 1981 catalog, which all seem to be from Denman in 1980: Samurai, Starlord, and Bureaucracy (out at least by September). The first two may not be adventures, but the last one describes itself directly as such:

Bureaucracy, the adventure of government agencies, places you in the role of an amateur mechanic who has devised a way to get 80 mpg from your old Cadillac. Your mission is to bring this cheap technology to the attention of the Department of Energy Assistance (DOEA). You must get past hordes of secretaries, muddle through myriad forms, and mix with middle management. But don’t lose yourself in DOEA’s great office building, the Octagon, and be sure to get finished before 4:30. In addition to the standard adventure features, Bureaucracy offers soft-keys for short conversations with the various personalities you will encounter and a “mini” 3-D graphics display.

All this establishes a picture of a company whose history is settled, even though it has a couple lost games (that will hopefully turn up one day). Today’s game throws that for a loop. It is not listed in any advertisement or catalog for Med Systems, yet it clearly uses the Frank Corr engine and I am fairly certain it is by Frank Corr himself (with or without Denman helping). It is a lost game that we didn’t even know was lost.

I found it while searching the same German archive I found Geheimagent XP-05. For the most part, the games there I recognized, although there are some German translations that I hadn’t seen (like one of Assignment 45). On disk 15 I found a file called MADHOUSE.CMD. There is a known Mad House game from 1983 but that’s a regular text adventure by Peter Kirsch written in BASIC. The CMD suggested the file on disk 15 was machine code so I gave it a load and was shocked by what I saw.

Above is the starting screen when you boot the game; there’s no mention of Med Systems. It has the inventory to the right like Deathmaze 5000 and Labyrinth and feels like an intermediate game between Labyrinth and Asylum. Was it a test game of some sort? That suggests it was written perhaps starting in October 1980, and for some reason shelved before Asylum came out. (Maybe the routine Frank Corr found in January made him want to start over?)

If that’s the case, then how did it get out? (I also considered if it was possible this was a third-party hack. While people made their own games with the Scott Adams database format, Madhouse is pure machine code and doesn’t lend itself to getting modified without modern tools.)

I have played a fair amount and nothing matches either Asylum game. It could be the Asylum material will creep in or it could all be brand new. Either way I don’t understand how the Germans have a copy. Perhaps some content in the game itself will help (Denman appears in Asylum II, so cameos aren’t impossible).

You start in a 1×1 cell with no bed or items. The only thing I could find that worked was to YELL. This causes an elevator sound, and a “sadistic guard” to approach.

He drops a “green key” but it does not open the door. The only thing to do is to YELL again whereupon you get “hit by a rubber truncheon” and end up in another cell, in the dark.

The dark cell is a 2 by 1 room so you need to move slightly before finding the right wall where OPEN DOOR acknowledges there is a door there.

Now UNLOCK DOOR WITH GREEN KEY will work (just like Asylum 1 & 2 the game is fussy about complete sentences). This opens the map up wide:

Every door that has been passed through will unlock with the green key from the start of the game (except the elevator, which is already unlocked). Every other door either requires a different key (or lockpick, or grenade pin, or whatnot).

Facing “east” after leaving the starting room.

Near the start (to the “west” after passing through some locked doors, note there’s no compass so my directions are arbitrary) are two people in rooms. One of them wants to sell you a fuse for “5 gold coins”…

…and the other describes themselves as a “pyrotechnician” with no further clarification.

Past that is a section which can be confusing to map.

The Xes are placed so that in particular positions it looks the same in every direction. As long as you’re careful mapping it’s fine, but it does give the effect of a spinner or teleporter Wizardry-style without resorting to actually moving the player around.

That is, it is easy to lose track if you’re facing north, south, east, or west while passing through this “same visual in every direction” type of intersection.

Mind you, the game is perfectly happy to resort to teleporters like with Labyrinth; stepping on the northwest tile sends the player elsewhere, although I haven’t fully mapped out the result yet.

Out in the open to the south are some boxes (in the standard Med System style) with a variety of explode-y objects: gun powder, lighter fluid, and golden lighter. You can take the gun powder back to the “pyrotechnician” and they are willing to trade for a firework rocket and a bottle.

Fortunately you can use the word INMATE (like the Asylum games). The game runs out of characters if you attempt to type GIVE GUN POWDER TO PYROTECHNICIAN.

Finally, in addition to the teleport square in the corner (which I’m ignoring for now), there’s an elevator and a “transporter” device. The transporter is an item you can pick up but it is too heavy to move, and it has a button. It doesn’t work yet but there’s a “fuseholder with a fuse” that is suggestive.

Unfortunately, PRESS RED BUTTON gets the message “Bad construction” which might mean some kind of bug. My guess is the fuse needs to be replaced first, via the inmate who wants 5 gold coins.

The elevator works normally without issues as long as you close the door behind you.

Level one has a guard that says to go back to your cell.

You can also get yourself trapped by a “protective steel wall”. Nothing else is accessible (for now).

Level two is where the player starts, and level three represents another large map, although some squares have mines (the screen turns white, you die).

Clearly the next step is to work on the third floor and the area reached by the teleporter, but teleporting and death squares tend to make mapping take a long time, so I thought this would be a good place to report in.

If you want the game for yourself, I have a download link here. There are no hints or clues anywhere because there is no documentation that this game ever even existed.

Tuesday, 11. November 2025

Renga in Blue

Ringen: Under the Low Morning Sun

I’ve finished the game; my previous posts are needed for context. You can read my complete Ringen series including the 2019 content here, and my series starting from the DOS port here. Nearly to the end, this game has a serious issue with how events are triggered: it relies heavily on random number generation. This … … Continue reading →

I’ve finished the game; my previous posts are needed for context. You can read my complete Ringen series including the 2019 content here, and my series starting from the DOS port here.

Balrog via WETA.

Nearly to the end, this game has a serious issue with how events are triggered: it relies heavily on random number generation. This is an issue I’ve brought up multiple times but it’s worth a re-fresh:

Suppose you have an event that happens 1% of the time in your game, checking every turn. How likely is it that it will take over 100 turns to see the event?

Intuitively, many people would think it quite unlikely. Another way to phrase the question is “how likely is it to get 99% — the failure state — 100 times in a row?” This is simply .99 raised to the 100th power, or approximately 36.6%. That means more than a third of players will be failing 100 times in a row.

How about 200 times in a row? That seems unlikely, right? Well, no, it’s actually 13.4%. Remember this is a designer who likely was thinking “oh it’ll be about 50, at worst about 100” and more than 1 of 10 in players are now waiting double the “maximum”.

Surely not 300 turns in a row? That’s still around 5%, or 1 in 20 of all players. Especially in the context of a text adventure, 300 turns is a very long time.

The curious thing about Ringen is there is at least a little acknowledgement of this problem. Let me go back to the scene with Legolas appearing, and giving Sting (which turned out to be central to my last leap and winning the game).

I will try to help you out of here, but first I will try to find our mutual friend Gandalf. In the meantime, help yourself the best you can. Fortunately, I have found your dear sword, Sting. Take your magic weapon, and you will have something to defend yourself with! We’ll meet again soon!

The Legolas encounter can occur any time in the game, with a 1% chance. The source code also adds an extra condition that Legolas will appear automatically if you exceed 200 moves (what I ended up doing on a rest was just walking back and forth between two rooms, and it did take until move 201 for Legolas to show up). So, under normal play conditions most players will eventually do enough turns to see him.

The problem is that the upshot — the thing I was missing — is a random roll that happens after you get Sting. What you want to happen is have the “small trolls” appear again (the ones who thought you were a wizard). However, in actual practice, they weren’t showing up for me; at first this was just by chance, but then I went to check source code and tried to get them to show intentionally and still had enormous trouble. I went to over 300 moves without seeing them (1 in 20 isn’t that unlikely! It’s just your natural 20 in D&D!)

They see the glittering sword you are holding, shout wildly, and run away in total confusion.

In the process of doing this, one of the trolls drops some clothes. (This is non-obvious; you have to either look at the room again or return to it later and be observant.) You may recall last time I was trying to translate “trollham” and I went with “troll-skin” knowing there was some ambiguity. K had it right in the comments: you’re supposed to dress like a troll to win the battle against the Balrog. The other items you’ll need are Balin’s axe and the wizard staff (technically the One Ring because the game doesn’t let you drop it, and you need to escape with it, but the Balrog can see you either way so it doesn’t matter if you are wearing it).

Before taking on that battle, a couple more RNG instances —

Back at the dragon I was confused about an inclined room to the north where seemingly every direction drops the player back down to the start. I was a victim, again, of RNG: going north sometimes will drop back to the start, but sometimes drop into a “royal” room instead.

I may not have every room (see: RNG, even testing 20 times there’s no guarantee you didn’t miss something) and on my winning run I didn’t even bother entering; it’s just treasures like a crown and a shield. (They would help with the 200 point thing with the wizard, but a.) I didn’t bother with the wizard on my final run b.) I already had enough treasures to fill my inventory, so for any extra treasures to count I needed to cash them in at the Pawnbroker, something I never figured out how to do.)

I also had an encounter with Arwen. I believe this triggers if your points are above a certain level and then your random number gets lucky again, and it is worth mentioning because it redeems the wizard scene slightly: she gives you a tiara and tells you explicitly the wizard now wants to see you, making it not so arbitrary any more to visit him.

Ei strålende vakker alveprinsesse får se deg. Hun stopper opp og ser på deg med et fortryllende vakkert smil, og sier :

`Jeg er Arwen Undomiel av høyalvenes folk.
Jeg må straks tilbake til mine egne, så jeg har ikke tid til å prate.
Ta denne tiaraen, Ringbærer, den vil kanskje kunne hjelpe deg.
Trollmannen ville treffe deg på sitt oppholdssted. Gå dit!’

Prinsessa forsvinner i en sky av flagrende gevanter.

A beautiful elf princess comes by and sees you. She stops and looks at you with an enchantingly beautiful smile, and says:

“I am Arwen Undomiel of the people of the High Elves.
I have to get back to my own people now, so I don’t have time to talk.
Take this tiara, ring bearer, it may be able to help you.
The Wizard wanted to meet you at his location. Go there!”

The Princess disappears in a cloud of fluttering robes.

Arwen Joins the Quest. From the Hildebrandt brothers in 2000 for the magazine Inquest.

Finally, the bit with the earthquake that opens a gap is not linked to the picking up the ring — it eventually just happens. This allows you to visit the Pawnbroker and the west side of the lake and the Palantir without worrying about Gollum swiping the ring.

You may incidentally wonder how I handled reclaiming the ring from Gollum. I just made sure he didn’t steal it in the first place. I don’t know the exact logic (I studied the code and I’m still unclear) but when I was ready for the final challenge, I put on the ring right before entering the earthquake passage; there’s enough time to get to the Balrog and kill it before taking the ring off, and Gollum can only steal the ring if you’re visible.

With all that taken care of, while approaching the Balrog in troll clothes he pauses, giving you enough time to act.

The Balrog seems to hesitate a bit.
What are you going to do now?

A little parser struggle here; “use axe” doesn’t work (even though that’s what you’re using), you have to “kill balrog” instead.

You attack the Balrog with Durin’s axe!
The giant monster roars furiously and strikes after you!
Durin’s holy axe seems to have a life of its own!
Suddenly it flies from your hand and hits the monster in the eye!
The monster takes a step back, loses its footing, and stands swaying.
What are you going to do now?

Using the staff, which before gave out stunning light:

The Balrog falls with a terrifying scream into the abyss.
You have defeated the Balrog!

This is not the end of the game. The fact this keeps going a little longer is arguably the classiest part of the game; not only is there one last dramatic moment, but the ending feels like a real denouement. So many of our fantasies have had an abrupt “you got all the treasures, you win”; even the ones with an “endgame” generally have not let the plot wind down gently.

You are following a road that runs east/west.
This is the widest road yet; the floor is worn from long use.
A fresh breeze comes from the east!

>e
Okay.
You are walking on a wide east/west road.
A breeze is felt from the east, and there is a faint daylight coming from there!

There are multiple rooms going out and you can find some of the random treasures here; on my winning run there was a platinum egg and Boromir’s horn. Just right after the exit:

You are on the east side of the Gate Hall. To the east, the mountain opens up.
You can see the blue morning sky a stone’s throw away, from a wide portal.
Just a few more steps, and you’ll be outside!

From behind the stones, a horde of Uruk trolls suddenly jump out with cries and block the entrance.
In the middle of them sits a black, shrouded figure on a black horse. It is a Ringwraith, a Nazgul!

With a thunderous voice the Nazgul says:
`Stop! Who are you, walking in troll clothes?’

ha ha ha yeeeeees

You see, I knew exactly what was about to happen: while Sting scared some trolls and caused them to drop some clothing, surely it was put in the game for a nobler purpose?

Nazgul illustrated by Margrethe II of Denmark for a Danish edition of Lord of the Rings.

>kill nazgul
Sting flashes furiously, and with one blow you knock the stunned Nazgul off his horse! The Uruk trolls recoil in surprise.
What are you going to do now?

You can now go east to escape (if you do anything else, you get pelted with spears).

Du er utenfor de store portene i Dimrill-dalen.
Mot øst strekker den store porten seg, og du kan se et lite vann blinke under deg. Morgenhimmelen er blå, og den lave sola skinner på fjellet over deg. Under et steinkast mot vest gaper de svarte åpningene – dystre og skjebnesvangrende. Bare litt til nå, så har du klart det!


Ok.
Du er på et platå øst for de store portene.
Under deg er den grønne dalen, og speilsjøen ligger som et prydblad og funkler under den lave morgensola; som nå endelig kaster sine stråler på deg. Intet troll kan nå deg her. Du har klart å komme igjennom Tåkefjellene. Som Ringbærer har du trosset alle farer, og fått med deg Ringen, Den Ene, gjennom de dype minene i Moria – Gratulerer!

You are outside the great gates of the Dimrill Valley.
To the east stretches the Great Gate and you can see water shimmer. The morning sky is blue, and the low sun shines on the mountains above you. A stone’s throw to the west, the openings gape black and gloomy. Just a little farther!

>e
OK.
You are on a plateau east of the gates.
Below you is the green valley; the mirror lake sits like a leaf and sparkles under the low morning sun, which now finally casts its rays for you. No troll can reach you here. You have managed to get through the Misty Mountains. As a ring bearer, you have defied all dangers, while taking the ring, the One, through the deep, the mines of Moria – Congratulations!

This had the most satisfying ending I’ve seen in a text adventure for a while. Despite the action being steps forward, there’s something much more dramatic and tangible here than the usual passage (with the brief tangle with the Nazgul at the end).

It almost makes up for the terrible RNG parts. There’s no real “points” here to balance, but I did have multiple hours wasted on what turned out to be bad dice rolls, and the game was never transparent about what was going on behind the scenes. I think the intent works better in a computer lab: multiple people playing in such a setting are more likely to collectively trigger certain events, so if one person meets Legolas the others know he is around somewhere.

The treasures came off as superfluous, even with the point-total aspect to the wizard (why should I care about the platinum egg on the way out?), but again, there’s a collective-group sense to them: if this is a game people are burning processor power over a whole semester on, forcing the addition of a restriction to computing time, an extra element other than just beating the game helps.

If nothing else, it helped I felt like I was “in the world” of Tolkien more than Ring Quest, despite that game’s bigger sweep of focus (and boosted ability scores handed over to Frodo, who was able to solo the Balrog).

Checking against the MUD, the author included many of the same rooms, but mixed up their geography. I still don’t know where to find the sulfur in MUD-form (to get by the dragon) or how to find the name on the third riddle (it would be amusing if it could be brute-forced just like Ringen; there’s no apparent wizard substitute on the MUD). As you can just walk out of the region in the MUD it loses much of its tension. The original product was in the end more satisfying, even if I had quite slow progress due to the Norwegian.

Original notes for translating the room descriptions to MUD form.

Coming up: A completely unknown and undocumented game by a (relatively) famous company. It hasn’t even been mentioned in this blog’s comments before.


The People's Republic of Interactive Fiction

November meeting (online)

The Boston IF meetup for November will be Thursday, November 20, 6:30 pm Eastern time. We will post the Google Meet link to the mailing list on the day of the meeting. (Yes, there was an October meeting. It was Oct 27th, but I failed to post the link. Apologies!)

The Boston IF meetup for November will be Thursday, November 20, 6:30 pm Eastern time. We will post the Google Meet link to the mailing list on the day of the meeting.

(Yes, there was an October meeting. It was Oct 27th, but I failed to post the link. Apologies!)

Monday, 10. November 2025

Renga in Blue

Ringen: He Must Be a Wizard

(Continued from my previous posts.) Some progress, although I confess to looking at the source code for one puzzle; I have absolutely no regrets whatsoever based on what I found. Just to clear up an issue I had last time, I somehow translated “en skitten striesekk” as a “pile” rather than a “sack”; I was … … Continue reading →

(Continued from my previous posts.)

Some progress, although I confess to looking at the source code for one puzzle; I have absolutely no regrets whatsoever based on what I found.

The 1984 Norwegian translation of Lord of the Rings, considered a superior version to the 70s one. Via Reddit. There’s a third translation called Ringdrotten from 2006 which adds more dialectical flair.

Just to clear up an issue I had last time, I somehow translated “en skitten striesekk” as a “pile” rather than a “sack”; I was reinforced in this by trying to “ta striesekk” (ta=take) and being denied, leading me to think it was an item that was not meant to be taken. You have to refer to the noun as a “sekk”, and then holding it will passively increase your inventory limit. (I should have done my image search.)

Regarding the cylinder (“sylinder”) I wasn’t sure about, I hadn’t randomly done “bruk sylinder” with it anywhere

Sylinderen utvider seg svært raskt. Snart er den helt oppblåst, og det viser seg til slutt at den har blitt til ei stor og sikker plastflåte.

The cylinder expands very quickly. Soon it is fully inflated, and has turned into a large, secure plastic raft.

“Plastic”, eh? In any case, it meant this was a “you’ll know where to use it when you see it” type item, not something where (I originally had in my head) I need to find a matching sphere and pyramid, or I need to find a hole in a door that it becomes a key for.

The magic staff similarly reacts to “bruk”, and creates a burst of light. If you’re being chased by trolls (from off the area to the north, say) they’ll scatter. The only problem is you can’t use the staff to assault their position because they just keep respawning in the same turn.

Finally, a fun encounter after getting the mithril armor gifted by the elves (which again, like, the sack, gets used passively, you don’t specify you wear it):

En liten flokk med småtroll kom nettopp gående ut av en sidegang. De bråstopper da de får øye på deg.
Med et triumferende rop støter den ene et spyd rett i magen din !!
Spydet skrenser av, og det faller ned brukket.
`Han må være en trollmann !’, skriker den ene hest, og alle trollene forsvinner forsvinner i ei voldsom fart.

A small group of trolls come out of a side passage and stop suddenly when they see you.
With a triumphant shout, one of them thrusts a spear right into your stomach!
The spear snaps, falling to the ground broken.
“He must be a wizard!” shouts one of the trolls, and they all quickly disappear.

This left me with a magnifying glass and a knife unused. I tried a restart and found that items were shifted a bit — placement of some things are randomized (like treasures) but others are not (seemingly the “practical” items like the magnifying glass and the raft). I found some stones (which turn out to be flint and can make sparks, but don’t light anything I can find) and Boromir’s horn (which you can play, bringing your spirits up, but doesn’t do anything useful I’ve found).

One last random-position item is some rope, which breaks the practical/treasure dichotomy, but seems to be purely optional. On the far north of the big corridor (with the trolls guarding making any progress farther) there’s a branch to the east leading to a “star room” (“covered with deep-blue silk walls and glittering stars”) followed by an otherwise-undescribed “wizard’s room”. The Star Room includes a hole with a hook next to it, and if you use the rope there you can climb down to the troll dungeon (the same area that you can get tossed into involuntarily by being chased). I think the only reason to do this is there’s a random chance the trolls will kill rather than capture, so the rope is a sure thing, but sometimes the rope is randomized to be out of reach anyway.

You may notice a very important item mentioned on the map. It can’t be reached from the dungeon (I think); I’ll get back to it.

After either being tossed in the prison or entered via rope, there’s a message below giving a hint how to escape.

The lower dungeon.
This is a small hole roughly carved out of the rock. An exit is up. On the dirty and dusty wall is a sign: “I, Gloin, was here. There is a secret exit from here, which the trolls do not know about, made by us dwarves. Just say the name of the legendary Bilbo’s nephew, son of Drogo, and you will escape — but watch out for trolls!”

FRODO works here. You can then go south and east to find what the game describes as a climbable wall, except nothing I’ve thrown at it works (trying to actually use the verb climb has the game respond if you mean up or down, suggesting that the directions up and down are overriding, but neither works anyway).

Veien mot øst er blokkert av en mistenkelig glatt og skitten steinvegg. Det virker som om det skal være mulig å forsere denne.

The route to the east is blocked by a suspiciously smooth and dirty stone wall. It seems as if it should be possible to climb over it.

I threw a ton of verbs out here with no luck, but since I’m using an English-Norwegian dictionary, I could be missing something totally obvious.

If you go south a bit from here there’s a “stone table” which seems like it might be moved over to the wall (so you can get high enough to climb). No verbs here work either and the noun isn’t even recognized, suggesting to me I’m wrong here, but given the wall has completely stumped me I can’t discard anything.

With the aforementioned wall (probably stuck by a verb), the “maze” which might just be a trap in the undergrowth, the trolls, and the witch with the riddles being my only real obstacles, I cracked at each one for a while alternating but just had no luck at all. The trolls seemed the most promising since you can pull them away from their guard spot and they have lots of reactions, but there seems to be an endless supply of them so it doesn’t matter. I started to suspect (especially on the wall) I was having a verb issue, so decided to dive into the source code.

I ran across this in the opening lines:

1160 NA$=”VDSRZKB”:NA$=MID$(NA$,INT(RND(1)*7)+1,1)+”icci”

That’s making a set of names (vicci, dicci, sicci, etc.) by random choice. I decided to try them out on the Huldra (“Witch and sorceress, what is my name?”) and got lucky my first try: “‘Correct — and never come back!’ A hole opens up in the floor.”

The hole leads down to the One Ring, behind the trolls.

Trollenes skattekammer!!
Ei stor, flat steinhelle dekker mesteparten av gulvet. I et hjørne er det ei sjakt hvor det stiger opp råtten stank. Går du ned dit vil du ikke komme opp igjen samme veien. Det er ei dør mot sør.
Du ser:
En liten gullring uten inskripsjoner. Dette er Herskerringen, Den Ene.

The Trolls’ Treasury!
A large, flat slab of stone covers most of the floor. In one corner is a shaft with a rotten stench. If you go down, you can’t come up the same way. There is a door to the south.
You see:
A small gold ring with no inscription. This is the Ring of Power, The One.

While the ring is often depicted with the Black Speech on it, by default the One Ring is plain, and the words only appear when the ring is heated up. This is depicted in the Peter Jackson movie:

From here you can drop into the prison or just use invisibility to saunter away. Note that wearing the ring for too long will cause Doom so you should take it off again once safe (“If you wear it too long, Sauron will be able to capture you in his power”).

After getting the ring, an earthquake hits and a new exit in the long hall busts open, leading to the east. In my play sequence I explored that first before looping back, but let me explain how you were supposed to find the witch’s name (Vicci / Dicci / etc.) in the first place. I needed the source code again.

There’s a scene with a wizard — back at the Star Room — where the wizard appears and tells you some information.

You are looking for the ring you have lost, but it is well hidden in the trolls’ treasury. There is no way you can get past the guards alone, but there is a person in Moria who can help you. somewhere in the mountains lives an old witch who knows an entrance to the treasure chamber.

He then tells you the name, based on the random choice at the start of the game.

I spent a long time (without checking the code) trying to get this scene but never could. Eventually — after about two hours of effort — I gave in:

5410 IF RN%=20 AND NOT(TB%) AND SC%>200 THEN 6420

SC is referring to the score. You need 200 points for the scene to trigger.

(… incomprehensible yelling goes here …)

If this was a low threshold, this moment might be semi-acceptable, but 200 is a tough score to hit: you need to visit all the rooms (visiting a room gets a point), and you need to get somewhat lucky in the layout of the items (some which can land in the post-ring area which you are about to see). You only get points for items if you’re holding them so you need to shuffle your inventory to high-value items even if you aren’t using them. If you wander into the Star Room with these conditions you’ll trigger the wizard.

It’s one thing to know that as a goal you need score, but prior to this, there was no indication that score was anything more than a progress marker. I was storing all the items in a central chamber as there was no obvious “treasure bonus spot” and because I was reloading after dying, I wasn’t necessarily including “explore every side room” in my save file — after all why would you expect a stop by a Rose Garden would cause a wizard to appear all the way across the map?

I can’t be sure but I think it’s possible to simply get unlucky with item placement and have it be impossible to reach 200 points. After figuring all this out I ended up going back to guessing the name randomly (and saving right beforehand) because it was so much easier.

Going back to the newly created hole (post-Ring finding) and going east:

To the north is an opening, while the main corridor continues from east to west. In one corner is a dirty, heavy stone slab; impossible to carry. In the middle is an area which appears to have writing, but it is so small you can’t decipher it.

This is where the magnifying glass comes in handy.

Jeg, Filur, risset dette.
Durins øks i menneskehender
skal en gang beseire
den grusomme Balrogen.
Ild skal sprute og glør fyke
når mennesket i trollham
ødelegger det uhyret
som har kuet Durins barn,
og jagde dem vekk fra minene
de en gang for lenge siden bygde
med sine egne hender.

I, Filur, carved this.
Durin’s axe in human hands
shall one day vanquish
the cruel Balrog.
Fire shall burst and embers blaze
when the man in troll-skin
destroys the monster
that has subjugated Durin’s children,
and driven them from the mines
they once built long ago
with their own hands.

“Trollham” which I currently have as “troll-skin” is a curious word and the translation may be important for the final puzzle of defeating the Balrog. (Does the Mithril count?) It does seem like us (Frodo) will be the one doing the killing/wounding, but we’re not human? (Can “mennesket” refer to a Hobbit rather than full-on Human? Does this depend on which translation of Lord of the Rings you’re using?) I did run into Legolas later so rather than doing the deed ourselves we may be handing the sacred axe (the one the “scary dwarf” kills us over) off to someone else. This conflicts with another piece of information later, though.

While in this area, almost inevitably, Gollum shows up and steals the ring. I bet you can figure out what “min dyrebare” means.

Ååååhh, min dyrebare !! Min egen Ring, endelig !

I have not found where he ends up to get the Ring back (my guess he somehow lands in prison, which I haven’t checked, or he still keeps eyes on you — there’s still a “shadow” that appears once in a while, although I’m at a 25% chance of that being Sauron instead).

Just exploring without the ring — you can drop down into a Great Hall, and then off a side passage reaching a Secret Chamber (so-named because of an unmentioned exit to reach there); going north then goes to an Even More Secret Chamber and the palantir.

This is the palantir of Orthanc.
This ball, and three like it, were made long ago by the elves.
With such a palantir you can see things that are happening far away, and things that will happen in the future.

Use this too many times and Sauron gets you, but you can get a few hints. Notably Aragon says something about “the key” being in the blackest depths (there’s a key later just lying around, so maybe he doesn’t mean a literal key)? Gimli, more helpfully, has a palantir appearance where he says…

The dwarves only accept the Ringbearer touching Durin’s axe! If you have it, you will be fine!

…meaning ring + axe is safe. (I need to get the ring back from Gollum first, though!)

From the LOTR card game, art by Nino Vecia.

Incidentally, near here is where I ran into Legolas, and unfortunately it’s another cryptic trigger like the wizard so I don’t know the exact conditions.

Towards you comes a tall, sturdy figure dressed in white elven clothing.
It’s your dear companion Legolas who is finally here to help! He hugs you with a friendly embrace, and says in a low voice:

‘I will try to help you out of here, but first I will try to find our mutual friend Gandalf. In the meantime, help yourself the best you can. Fortunately, I have found your dear sword, Sting. Take your magic weapon, and you will have something to defend yourself with! We’ll meet again soon!’

With long, firm steps, Legolas walks away down a hall and disappears.

I have not put Sting in action yet. There’s another, more regular encounter in the same area: a “pawnbroker” dwarf who says something about trading treasures. (I have thrown out many verbs with no luck, and this even includes checking for verbs in the source code.)

We accept all valuables and give good prices!
Have a good trade with Thorin!

Across from the pawnbroker is a lake; if you remember way back 2000 or so words ago, I mentioned the cylinder was really an inflatable raft, so it can apply here…

You set out on your raft. Just before you reach the other side, the raft hits a sharp stone and flips over!
The raft drifts away, but you make it to land safely.

…leading to what I assume is the last section of the game.

I found a gold key on the other side, followed by a dead dwarf with a fairly unhelpful message:

Couldn’t …. the great monster … cruel … 20 feet high … no chance … while I am still alive … Listen … my last words … not pr … the balrog out…. by … !!

Balin.

The letters cut off (“pr”) might represent some sort of Norwegian word puzzle, and if that’s the case, I would prefer someone who knows the language well just tell me because that’s past my skill.

ikke pr … balrogen ute

There’s a “secret chamber” with a door where it says you need to people to open it — maybe we get Gollum along for the trip? — a cave with an exit so burdened with cobwebs the game says to not bother (hard to know if that’s serious or not) and then of course the Bridge of Khazad-dum. Rather than chasing us up to the bridge, the Balrog is lurking at the end.

Like this, but the sides are reversed, and also it’s just Frodo. Via coolminiornot.

Keep in mind this is being done without the One Ring on, I’m just mapping ahead:

Mot øst er det en svart og bunnløs avgrunn!! Ei smal og spinkel steinbru buer seg over denne til østsida. Dette er Khazad-dum, dvergenes forsvarsverk mot øst. Brua er så smal at bare en angriper vil kunne passere over i bredden – og vil derfor være lett sårbar.


Ok.
Du er på steinbrua Khazad-dum!
Dette er ei spinkel steinbru over ei bunnløs kløft. Under deg kan du bare se mørke. Mot øst de første salene som fører ut i friheta!!
Føttene til den enorme Balrogen tårner opp over deg !!
Det stygge uhyret løfter ei meterstor hånd for å fjerne det ekle, lille krypet som rekker han til knærne !

Balrogen ser hånlig på deg. Før du får gjort noe har han knust deg som et egg under de svære labbene !!

To the east is a black, bottomless abyss! A narrow, thin stone bridge arches over to the east side. This is Khazad-dum,
the dwarves’ defenses to the east. The bridge is so narrow that only a single attacker can cross — so will therefore be vulnerable.

>e
Ok.
You are on the stone bridge of Khazad-dum!
This is a thin stone bridge over a bottomless chasm. Below you you can only see darkness. To the east are the halls that lead to freedom!
The giant Balrog towers above you!
The hideous monster raises a meter-long hand to remove the nasty little creature that reaches his knees!

The Balrog looks at you with a sneer. Before you can do anything, he has crushed you like an egg with his giant hands!

It certainly feels like I’m close to the end; I need the ring back, mainly, although I suspect I’ll need to do something other than just be wearing the ring and holding the axe in order to win.


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Coming Thursday! “Hunter: The Reckoning—A Time of Monsters”

We’re excited to announce that Hunter: The Reckoning — A Time of Monsters is releasing this Thursday, November 13th! You can play the first three chapters for free today on our site, pre-order the app on iOS, wishlist on Steam, and check out the author interview as well! Topple the vampires from the streets below! Will you unite the homeless, the gangs, and the secret hunter societies to defy vampi

We’re excited to announce that Hunter: The Reckoning — A Time of Monsters is releasing this Thursday, November 13th!

You can play the first three chapters for free today on our site, pre-order the app on iOS, wishlist on Steam, and check out the author interview as well!

Topple the vampires from the streets below! Will you unite the homeless, the gangs, and the secret hunter societies to defy vampiric rule?

Hunter: The Reckoning — A Time of Monsters is an interactive novel by Paul Wang, set in the World of Darkness. It’s entirely text-based, one million words and hundreds of choices, without graphics or sound effects, and fueled by the vast, unstoppable power of your imagination.

Welcome to the Downtown Eastside, a place Vancouver has tried its best to forget. Sandwiched between the steel and glass towers of the financial district and the gentrified tourist playground of the new harbor, the human detritus of the city keeps getting squeezed into a smaller and smaller box. Dispossessed, trampled, ignored…It will only take the right spark to set the fury ablaze.

Down on your luck, you’ve found yourself in a homeless encampment here. When a vampire masquerading as a cop attacks you, the misery of Downtown Eastside takes on a whole new dimension. Suddenly, you have a place to direct your rage: the world of shadow that preys upon the misery of your new neighbors.

But this first glimpse is just that: a first glimpse. A gash in the fabric of reality as you knew it. Soon, you find yourself torn between the street gangs of the Downtown Eastside, RMCP special ops, a coterie of Thin Blooded vampires, multiple secret hunter societies, and the Chinese Triads. The shadow world just goes deeper and deeper, and it seems like someone is ready and willing to betray you at every turn. Of course, each of them has something to offer you: a home, a job, a career? Money, glory, vengeance, or immortality?

Despite these temptations, you are not alone. In the short time that you’ve been here, you’ve met the fiercest defenders of humanity: your neighbors. You did not expect to find the camaraderie of the Downtown Eastside to be so strong, but now that you’re here, you can’t imagine anything else. Together, can you and your new friends stand against the darkness? When the time comes, will you sacrifice yourself for your community, or will you choose to become one more bloodsucking predator of the night?

  • Play as male, female, or nonbinary; gay, straight, or bi
  • Scrounge for food, weapons, and allies in the back alleys of Vancouver’s Downtown Eastside
  • Defy powerful vampiric foes lurking within the heart of the city—or become their willing servant
  • Help your found family to make peace with their inner demons, or manipulate them for your own ends
  • Set a vampire on fire

Hunted, broke, and homeless, your nights seem numbered. They have everything. You only have your guts, your wits, and a stubborn refusal to die.

Saturday, 08. November 2025

Renga in Blue

Ringen: And in the Darkness Bind Them

(Continued from my last post, or if you want to read my entire series on this game including when I played it on a MUD, the link here will work.) I’ve done some major exploration of Moria, which is very open. I get the impression that part of the goal is “touristic”, just letting the … … Continue reading →

(Continued from my last post, or if you want to read my entire series on this game including when I played it on a MUD, the link here will work.)

I’ve done some major exploration of Moria, which is very open. I get the impression that part of the goal is “touristic”, just letting the player inhale the air of Tolkien’s universe without having too many puzzles in the way.

Not like Moria is as safe as the Polynesian Islands

Moria, as shown on a movie poster by Dan Mumford. Source.

Let’s start with a meta-map. (If you haven’t seen one of mine before, this is a map where the directions are only vague, and is intended to show the general interconnectivity and sort things into regions.)

The maze may be an absolute trap — at least it seems to be one room that loops, and any items that you drop get swallowed up — and the trolls are an obstacle I haven’t gotten past yet. (And the point of them may not be to go past, but I’ll get into that later.)

The start area is central in more ways than one. There’s multiple holes visible in the ceiling from the start that you can’t reach, but you can go through the on the other side. That means multiple places will drop down back to the starting room (whenever they occur, I’ve marked them in red).

Regarding that “shadow” I saw just east of the start room, it appears at random at any point during the explorations, so is an “event” like the pirate appearing in Adventure. You can simply just wait in place (or as happened to me often, test to see if particular exits work and get lots of “dead end” type messages) and it will re-appear. There’s a knife nearby and I tried to USE it while the shadow was visible but Frodo is apparently “clumsy” and “unaccustomed” to handling one and just manages to cut himself instead. That’s not to say an aggressive approach will always fail but for the moment in my gameplay the shadow (my guess is, Gollum having reclaimed the ring and lurking invisible) is just something that happens.

Another possible random encounter is a “flokk med småtroll” (“group of small trolls”) although as long as you move to a different room when they appear they won’t cause trouble. (Orc in Norwegian is Orker; when I first encountered the flokk I briefly wondered if småtroll was intended to mean orc.)

Just to the north of the start is the axe which promised death, and I took it with no ill effects (but I theorized one might come in the future). Indeed, later (I don’t know if “at random” or on a timer) a “skummel dverg” (“scary dwarf”) arrives and looks at you; it may simply run away, but if you happen to be holding the axe, he’ll return with friends.

Dvergen ser skarpt på øksa du holder og piler rundt hjørnet. Etter noen sekunder kommer en hel flokk dverger løpende mens de roper noe opphisset. De river fra deg den hellige øksa og hugger deg ned.

The dwarf looks intently at the axe you are holding and darts around the corner. After a few seconds, a pack of dwarves comes running while yelling. They rip the holy axe from you and cut you down.

Closing out the central area is a pile of straw to the west of the axe, and a “wing of literature” to the east. Randomly, that wing has an elf hat and a pearl necklace, but also the inside text of the One Ring written in Black Speech.

Ash Nazg durbatuluk,
ash Nazg gimbatul,
ash Nazg thrakatuluk
agh burzum-ishi krimpatul.

(“One Ring to rule them all, One Ring to find them, One Ring to bring them all and in the darkness bind them.”)

Proceeding in that same direction leads to a “square room”…

…where branching off to the north is a pyramid (“some notes of music can be heard in the distance”), a “rat’s nest”, and finally a dwelling of a “huldra”. The huldra is a Norwegian mythical creature/sorceress that is usually depicted as young…

Actual stamp from Norway, 2022. Via europa-stamps.

…but for the purposes of this game, it is old, and surrounded by toads. She asks if you want to solve three riddles; if you fail, you’ll get toad-ified.

Ei gammel trollkjerring sitter foran en stol oppstøttet av silkeputer.
Hun vrir det heslige ansiktet sitt til et groteskt grin og sier:

`Er du beredt til å svare på tre vanskelige og skjebnesvangre gåter?’

An old witch sits in front of a chair, propped up by silk pillows.
She turns her ugly face into a grotesque smile and says:

“Are you prepared to answer three difficult and deadly riddles?”

This was in MUD-Ringen and the riddles are the same, except that the translation of the creature is of a “ogress”. This is one moment we have confirmed from Pål-Kristian Engstad himself that this was added by him to the home computer version.

… I have only made this creature up from my imagination. It might or might not be very Tolkienish, but it always made the players wonder. I have personally always felt that the passing through of Moria was too briefly explained in Tolkien’s works, but that is in a way nice, since it allows to imagine what actually is there (or might be there).

The first riddle asks about a being who covets something round (Sauron) and the second, trickier riddle asks about which dwarf “made the great gate in the west.” Despite the gate in question being the Doors of Durin this refers to the dwarf Narvi.

He’s in the Rings of Power television show. (I like the dwarf parts, not wild about anything else.)

I have no idea the answer to the third riddle.

Deep in the mountains, in the Mines of Moria.
Witch and sorceress, what is my name?

It might be in-game rather than trivia (since the author already admitted the character was non-Tolkien). (And before anyone asks, “name” or “my name” do not work.)

Moving back to the main path, you reach a crossroads, then can go south down a slide (back to the starting room) or north past a “greenhouse”.

Du er inne i et fabelaktig drivhus av en dal!
Et mylder av vekster gror her, og det er ganske mørkt. Mot sør er ei åpning og mot nord fortsetter hagen så langt du kan se. Stien mot nord er smal, men brukbar.

You are inside a fabulous greenhouse of a valley!
A multitude of plants grow here, and it is quite dark. To the south is an opening; facing north, the garden continues as far as you can see. The path to the north is narrow but usable.

Off to one side is a “low hill” with an herbal drink; this herbal drink serves as healing (in case of, say, clumsy knife handling). Farther on is a dense undergrowth “maze” I mentioned earlier which may be a trap rather than a maze.

Du har gått deg vill i krattskogen!!


Ok.
Du har gått deg vill i krattskogen!!

>v
Ok.
Du har gått deg vill i krattskogen!!

>n
Ok.
Du har gått deg vill i krattskogen!!

Reversing back to the beginning and heading west is what I’m calling the Gorge Area.

To the far west is a Maritime Room with a cylinder (no idea what it does); the most important room is a hall with a bag of gold dust and some elves that appear. They will shout “troll” if you appear normally, but if you happen to be holding the elf hat they’ll have a different reaction.

Jeg er Gloriendel, lederen for denne lille flokken. Jeg ser av ditt hodeplagg at du er venn av alvene. Er du Ringbæreren?

I am Gloriendel, the leader of this small group. I see from your hat that you are a friend of the elves. Are you the Ringbearer?

Saying “yes” has Gloriendel give some advice about an “enormous monster” known as the Balrog which “has been in Moria since the dawn of time.” According to the elf, the One Ring has “a power greater than the Balrog” and that if you have “received the wizard’s mark” you may be able to overcome him.

You then receive a gift of mithril armor.

While you can go directly to the throne room area by going up where you meet the elves, I’m going to loop back to near the start where the knife was, and go east to what I’m calling the Huge Corridor Area.

As the name implies, the geography is dominated by a large corridor, although you can go up to a “window” to get a scene that I remember from MUD Ringen.

Du er ved vinduet.
Du ser utover et majestetisk slettelandskap. Fra ditt utsiktspunkt høyt oppe i fjellsida har du utsikt over fjell og daler ute i det fri, og den klare fullmånen som belyser landskapet. Mot sør strekker Tåkefjellene seg, og mot vest de gresskledte slettene i ditt hjemland. (Snufs!) Det er ikke mulig å presse seg ut av vinduet, men det er et hull i gulvet her, og mot sør ei vindeltrapp.

The direct translation from the MUD is:

You are standing by the window. You have a majestic view over the scenery from here. From this spot high up in the mountain you can see past mountains and valleys out in the free, and the clear full moon shines upon the landscape. Southwards the Misty Mountains extend, and to the west there are the grassy plains of your homeland. (Sniff!) You cannot squeeze yourself through the window, but there is a hole in the floor here, and a spiral staircase in the south end of the room.

I had theorized this was pulled from the original just due to how unusual a description of state of mind is in MUD-rooms. (In general, the DOS game has lots of “scenery” rooms so leans to MUD-like already. I can see why Pål-Kristian thought of porting it.)

The corridor includes a black staff and a necklace and at the far north are two trolls that will spot you right away (I assume the One Ring mitigates this). You can run away by climbing up, or you can try to run down the corridor instead and get captured and thrown in troll-jail. It’s then possible to break out and this seems to be a new area, but I’m going to save describing the dungeon for next time because I haven’t explored thoroughly yet. The important point here is that possibly you need to get captured to win the game.

The lower dungeon.
This is a small hole roughly carved out of the rock. An exit is up. On the dirty and dusty wall is a sign: “I, Gloin, was here. There is a secret exit from here, which the trolls do not know about, made by us dwarves. Just say the name of the legendary Bilbo’s nephew, son of Drogo, and you will escape — but watch out for trolls!”

One branch off the corridor leads to a “secret meeting room” with some stinking sulfur which will be used for a puzzle in a moment. In the meantime, let’s go to the last section I’m talking about today:

There’s a throne room described as being where the “Mountain King” held court, with a small side offshoot behind some drapes containing a magnifying glass. To the east is a “holy room” (with a “scent of incense and myrrh”) next to a “gold room” (everything is made out of gold, but you can’t pick it up) with an empty bottle. Curiously, the spiritual room is right next to a Vampire room, where some bats will bite and poison you if you hang out too long. The game explicitly mentions the medicine at the greenhouse as curing the poison.

Under the ceiling are several thousand small vampire bats. The floor is covered in excrement and there is an intense smell.

Back at the throne room just to the north is a dragon’s lair. This was in the MUD version and I kept getting shoved out of the room because of my scent being detected, but while holding the stinky sulfur it is possible to enter safely.

A fifty-meter-long dragon lies sleeping here. There appears to be an exit to the north, behind the dragon.

The problem is that going past the dragon just hits a slide, which goes back to the start! So I have no idea why you’d bother with the dragon in the first place. I still don’t know if the game’s norms allow this to be a “scene” for fun or if there must be some deeper significance (or at least a treasure).

Speaking of treasures, you may have spotted there have been items like the gold dust and the necklace which seem to serve solely as treasures in the Crowther/Woods style. I don’t know yet if that’s how they’ll work out; the game’s sole objective given at the start is escape, but perhaps the treasures count as points and Frodo can afford a small beach vacation before tackling Mount Doom.

Friday, 07. November 2025

Interactive Fiction – The Digital Antiquarian

The Space Sim’s Last Hurrah

This article tells part of the story of space sims. Amidst so much else, the 1990s saw the rise and fall of the narrative-driven space sim. The sub-genre was effectively invented in 1990, when Wing Commander dared to add a set-piece story line to the sturdy foundation of the more open-ended British classic Elite. It […]


This article tells part of the story of space sims.

Amidst so much else, the 1990s saw the rise and fall of the narrative-driven space sim. The sub-genre was effectively invented in 1990, when Wing Commander dared to add a set-piece story line to the sturdy foundation of the more open-ended British classic Elite. It reached a peak of commercial and critical acceptance in 1994 with Wing Commander III and TIE Fighter, only to fall off the big publishers’ radar completely by shortly after the turn of the millennium. As you regular readers know, I’ve been writing the final installments to a lot of stories recently, a symptom of the period of churn and consolidation in which these histories currently find themselves. Now I’m on the verge of writing my last words on not just a company but a whole category of games as a mainstream commercial force — almost, I’m tempted to say, a whole subculture of gaming, one of the oddest of them of all when you stop to think about it.

Even the phrase “space sim” is kind of strange and misleading. What were these games supposed to be simulating? Definitely not any form of real spaceflight — not when they chose to implement atmospheric drag, meaning that your ship slows down if you let off the throttle in exactly the way that a real vehicle out in the vacuum of space doesn’t. Their developers started with the way space combat was presented in the Star Wars films, which had themselves happily ignored everything we know about the nature of real space travel in favor of dogfights borrowed from old Second World War movies. Then they just piled on whatever seemed fun and interesting to them, which often entailed delving deeper into the same wellspring as George Lucas. (It was no coincidence that Lawrence Holland, one of the foremost practitioners of the space sim, cut his teeth as a game developer on World War II flight simulators.) Space sims were known by that name because of their vibe alone — because they subjectively felt like simulators, no matter how divorced they were from the reality of space travel. (There are lessons to be drawn from this, if we choose to heed them. The fact is that almost every game which is labelled a simulator is less of one than it purports to be. This is worth remembering any time anyone encourages you to take any game too seriously as a reflection of the real world.)

Chris Roberts’s Wing Commander games made the space-sim formula still more uncanny, by interleaving the missions in space with potboiler relationship drama. It may have been weird on the face of it, seemingly more a product of some random butterfly somewhere flapping its wings than anything flown in on the wings of fate, but for the better part of a decade quite a lot of people loved it.

And then they didn’t so much anymore…


Wing Commander III includes a love triangle. Because of course it does…

Being an inveterate hiker when I’m not sitting behind a computer, I can tell you that it’s sometimes harder than you think it ought to be to realize when you’ve reached peak elevation in a landscape. The same is true in the landscape of media. As I noted above, the space sim reached its peak already in 1994, even though it would take a few years for everyone to cotton onto that fact. For this was the year that both the Wing Commander series and LucasArts’s Star Wars space sims, the eternal yin and yang of the sub-genre, released their best-remembered installments.

Wing Commander III: Heart of the Tiger doubled down on creator Chris Roberts’s passion for the cinematic side of the experience by interleaving a fairly workmanlike space-combat game with a semi-interactive movie that featured digitized human actors, among them such established Hollywood talents as Jason Bernard, Malcolm McDowell, John Rhys-Davies, and Tom Wilson. In what was arguably the greatest feat of stunt casting in the history of games, the star of the show was none other than Mark Hamill. Over a decade after he had last portrayed Luke Skywalker on the big screen, he portrayed here another space-fighter jock, the player’s own avatar, Colonel Christopher Blair. The presence of so many recognizable actors garnered Wing Commander III considerable attention in the glossy mainstream press. The “Siliwood” dream of Northern and Southern California joining forces to forge a new form of entertainment was nearing its frenzied peak in tandem with the space sim in 1994. Wing Commander III was widely hailed, notwithstanding its computer-generated sets and general B-movie aesthetics, as a proof of concept for the better, richer interactive movies that were still to come. Hyped inside the industry as the most expensive game yet made, it garnered a rare five-stars-out-of-five review from Computer Gaming World, and sold at least half a million copies in the United States alone, at an average street price of about $70.

If Wing Commander III was trying to capitalize on gamers’ love for Star Wars in some less-than-subtle ways, LucasArts’s TIE Fighter had the advantage of literally being Star Wars, coming out of George Lucas’s very own games studio. It also had the advantage of being a much better, deeper game where it really counted, eschewing digitized actors and soapy relationship drama to focus firmly on the action in the cockpit. It too was given a perfect score by Computer Gaming World, and sold in similar numbers to Wing Commander III, albeit without attracting the same level of attention from the mainstream press.

Alas, it was mostly downhill for the two franchises from there; such is rather the nature of peaks, isn’t it? In early 1996, barely eighteen months after Wing Commander III, Chris Roberts and his employer Origin Systems were ready with Wing Commander IV: The Price of Freedom. Despite the short turnaround time, it represented another dramatic escalation in budget and ambition on the cinematic side of the equation. (The combat engine, with which Roberts by now hardly bothered to concern himself, was largely unchanged.) Mark Hamill and most of the rest of the previous cast were back, for a production that was shot on film this time rather than videotape, on real sets rather than in front of green screens that were filled in with computer-generated backgrounds after the fact. Yet many gamers found the end results to be paradoxically less stunning. The filmed sequences of Wing Commander IV fell into a sort of uncanny valley, being no longer clearly part of a computer game and yet having nowhere near the production values of even the most modest Hollywood features of the standard stripe. Probably more importantly, the Siliwood cultural moment was quickly passing, leaving the game with something of the odor of an anachronism. The mainstream was becoming more interested in the burgeoning World Wide Web than the wonders of multimedia and CD-ROM, even as hardcore gamers were embracing the non-stop action of the first-person-shooter and real-time-strategy genres, having lost patience with the long cutscenes and endless exposition of interactive movies.

For a cost of more than three times that of Wing Commander IIIWing Commander IV sold a third as many copies. Origin’s management told Chris Roberts that any future games in the series would have to scale back the movie angle and try harder to refresh the increasingly stale gameplay. By way of a response, Roberts quit his job at Origin.

From here, the decline was steep for Wing Commander. In September of 1996, the USA television network debuted Wing Commander Academy, a Saturday-morning cartoon featuring the voices of Mark Hamill, Malcolm McDowell, and Tom Wilson among other actors from the last couple of games. All of the parties involved had envisioned the show capitalizing on a hit game. Absent said hit, it disappeared from the airwaves after just thirteen episodes.

The franchise’s last hurrah as a game came with Wing Commander: Prophecy, which appeared at the end of 1997. “Wing Commander III and IV were both great products,” said Prophecy’s producer Adam Foshko, straining hard to be diplomatic toward his predecessor Chris Roberts, “but they are more like unequal halves. This is a much more synergistic product. It’s very team-driven. It’s not one person’s vision, and I think it shows.” At its best, Prophecy really did play better than any Wing Commander in years, evincing the far greater level of attention the team paid to the action in the cockpit. Less positively, the movie sequences were cheesier and more constrained, even as a plan to bring the game fully in line with the hardcore set’s current priorities by adding a multiplayer component ultimately came to naught. When Prophecy didn’t sell well, that was that for Wing Commander as a gaming franchise. The commercial prospects of an expansion pack that the team had been working on — a return to the old “mission disks” that had made Origin a bundle back before the former Luke Skywalker and his Hollywood friends had entered the picture — looked so dire that Origin just dumped the whole thing onto the Internet for free.

Meanwhile Lawrence Holland and his colleagues had been going through some travails of their own. After making a well-received TIE Fighter expansion pack and a “Collector’s CD-ROM” with yet more new missions to fly, Holland left LucasArts on amicable terms to start a studio called Totally Games, taking his technology and most of his team with him. From the average fan’s perspective, this was a distinction without a difference: Totally’s games would still be Star Wars space sims, and they would still be published by LucasArts.

Like their counterparts at Origin, the folks at Totally could totally see the potential in offering a multiplayer mode to keep up with the changing times. But unlike them, they stuck with the program. In fact, the next iteration of their series was designed to be multiplayer first and foremost. Holland and his people spent almost two years finding ways to make multiplayer work reliably despite all of the challenges of the high-latency, dial-up Internet of the era.

The result of those efforts landed with a resounding thud in the spring of 1997, becoming a case study in the dangers of failing to understand your customers. Holland’s X-Wing and TIE Fighter games may not have been interactive movies in the sense of Wing Commander III and IV, but people had nevertheless loved their unfolding campaigns, loved the sense of playing a part in what could easily have been a novel set in the Star Wars Expanded Universe. The ingeniously titled X-Wing vs. TIE Fighter didn’t give them any of that; its single-player mode was little more than a place to practice for multiplayer matches. “The sad part is, I was really looking forward to this game,” wrote Computer Gaming World’s reviewer, echoing the sentiments of thousands upon thousands of deeply disappointed ordinary players. “After the high of TIE Fighter, I wanted another Star Wars experience that would be just as immersive and fun. And while my wish for multiplayer Star Wars action was fulfilled, my hope for an equivalent single-player experience wasn’t.” In a last-ditch attempt to save their baby, Totally put together an expansion pack whose sole purpose was to provide a single-player campaign of the old style. It did so competently enough, but inspired it was not, and it never had much chance of rescuing a base game that was already a fixture of bargain bins by the time the expansion appeared in January of 1998.

In contrast to Wing Commander, however, LucasArts and Totally’s space-sim series was afforded one more kick at the can after 1998. To hear Lawrence Holland talk about it when it was still in development, Star Wars: X-Wing Alliance was the be-all, end-all in space sims. For those who wanted a story-driven campaign, this game’s would be the biggest and best ever. For those who wanted multiplayer action, this game’s multiplayer mode would be more stable and convenient than that of X-Wing vs. TIE Fighter. For those who cared about graphics, this game’s would be the best yet, taking full advantage of the 3D-accelerator cards that were proliferating everywhere. It was an ambitious plan, especially considering that this old-school Star Wars game had to be finished before The Phantom Menace, the first new Star Wars movie in more than a decade and a half, reached theaters in May of 1999, bringing with it an onslaught of next-generation toys and games.

X-Wing Alliance met that goal, being released in March of 1999. The most remarkable thing about it is how many of its other lofty goals it managed to achieve against the strictures of time and budget. The story is almost Wing Commander-like in its elaborateness, presenting for the first time a named, strongly characterized protagonist, a youthful member of a trading family caught between the Rebel Alliance and the Empire. His story is told not only through the usual mission briefings but also through emails and radio chatter full of enough interpersonal drama to warm the cockles of Chris Roberts’s heart. The campaign begins on the ice-planet Hoth, is interwoven with the events of The Empire Strikes Back and Return of the Jedi, and climaxes with you getting to fly the Millennium Falcon at the Battle of Endor. What dedicated Stars Wars fan could resist?


Sadly, further examination of X-Wing Alliance reveals some significant shortcomings. The individual missions are often unpolished, sometimes failing to even convey adequately what their goals are; trying to complete some of them feels like trying to read the designers’ minds. Ironically, this is the same general set of issues that dragged down the original X-Wing, upon which TIE Fighter did such a magnificent job of improving. It’s disheartening to see them making a return at this late date. Like so many flawed games, X-Wing Alliance might have been amazing if it had just been allowed a few more months in the oven.

That said, the biggest obstacle that X-Wing Alliance faced in the marketplace was probably just the tenor of the times. As I already noted, at a time when everyone was excited and optimistic about The Phantom Menace, the new face of Star Wars, this game was old-school. And yet that was only the beginning of the commercial headwinds it faced. Gamers in general were turning away from simulations in droves; real-world flight and combat simulators too, which had in some earlier years accounted for more than 20 percent of the computer-game industry’s total revenues, had now fallen markedly out of favor. Fewer and fewer gamers even owned joysticks anymore. (To what extent this was a cause and to what extent it was a symptom of simulators’ declining fortunes is a matter of debate.) Existing fans and would-be fans of simulations were being tempted away by other action-packed genres that were quicker and easier to pick up and play for the first time, while still offering plenty of long-term rewards for those who stuck with them. It seemed that fewer people had the patience for games that started by asking you to read a thick manual, then required you to go through a veritable digital flight school before you could start playing them for real.

At any rate, by Y2K both Wing Commander and the Star Wars space sims had been consigned by their publishers to the dustbin of history. Other titles in development that had dreamed of competing with the space sim’s dynamic duo head-on suffered the same fate. The most high-profile of the cancellations was a space sim from Sierra that took place in the universe of the recently concluded Babylon 5 television series. Created with heavy input from Christy Marx, a Babylon 5 scriptwriter who had earlier designed a couple of point-and-click adventure games for Sierra, it was supposed to “tart up a tired genre” and “radically change the face of gaming” with “non-linear, non-branching storytelling, a brilliant modular refit job on nearly five hours of [television composer] Christopher Franke’s music, plus an attention to the physics of space travel that will raise the high bar on space-combat games for years to come.” It got to within a few months of completion, got as far as having the box art prepared before falling victim in late 1999 to an uncongenial marketplace and to the chaos inside Sierra that had followed that venerable mom-and-pop company’s purchase by two separate corporate conglomerates in a period of just a few years.

Still, the space-sim diehards did get one last pair of classics from an utterly unexpected source before their favored sub-genre disappeared from the catalogs of the big publishers forever. In fact, many a grizzled joystick jockey will tell you even today that the second of the two Freespace games is the best of its type ever created — yes, better even than the hallowed TIE Fighter.


The first mover without whom Freespace would never have come to be was a native Chicagoan named Mike Kulas, whose early gigs as a game programmer included stints at subLogic of Flight Simulator fame and at Lerner Research, a precursor to the legendary Looking Glass Studios. At the latter workplace, he befriended one Matt Toschlog. “If this is what it means to run a company, we can do it too,” the friends decided after spending two years at the dawn of the 1990s on an ultimately unsatisfying racing game that was sold in the trade dress of Car and Driver magazine. “What’s the worst that could happen? It’ll fail and we’ll have to go back to work for somebody else.” Kulas and Toschlog moved out of the Boston area and back to Champaign, Illinois, also the home of subLogic. Champaign seemed a good place to open a new studio: it had the advantages of fairly cheap rents and a large pool of enthusiastic young tech talent, thanks to the University of Illinois Urbana-Champaign, the source of such innovations as the pioneering PLATO system of the 1970s and the point-and-click Mosaic browser that was popularizing the nascent World Wide Web at that very moment.

Kulas and Toschlog founded Parallax Software in June of 1993, six months before DOOM ignited a craze for immersive 3D action that would remake much of the industry in its image over the next few years. Luckily, Parallax was well-equipped to capitalize on the trend, what with the founders’ experience with 3D graphics and the passionate young sparks they were able to recruit from the nearby university. Descent, their very first game, put you behind the controls of a small flying vehicle and set you loose inside a series of 3D-rendered outer-space mining complexes, filled with robots gone haywire. It was different enough to stand out in a sea of DOOM clones, yet felt very much in step with the times in a broader sense. Upon its release in March of 1995, Descent became a surprise hit for its publisher Interplay, whose marketers were left scrambling to catch up to the buzz on the street with a port to the Sony PlayStation and television campaigns starring mid-tier celebrities. Made for less than half a million dollars, the game was one heck of a debut for Parallax. It and its almost-as-successful 1996 sequel were enough to make them think that winning fame and fortune in the games industry was actually pretty easy.

Matt Toschlog had never been happy in Champaign. Flush with all of that Descent cash, he wanted to move Parallax somewhere else. Mike Kulas, on the other hand, preferred to stay put. Unable to find any other way out of the impasse, the founders agreed to split the company between them. In late 1996, Toschlog moved to Ann Arbor, Michigan, to start Outrage Entertainment. Kulas decided to rename his half of the company Volition — “an intense act of will to accomplish something” — after stumbling across the word in a book. Outrage’s first project was to be the inevitable Descent3; Volition’s was to be Freespace, a space sim that would, as its name implied, take the player out of the asteroid mines and into the limitless inky-black freedom that lay beyond.

Freespace isn’t shy about displaying its influences. Created by a bunch of guys who adored LucasArts’s X-Wing and TIE Fighter sims, it hews unabashedly to their template. After the requisite flight training, you’re tossed into an interstellar war between your Terran Alliance and an alien race known as the Vasudans. Then another group of aliens shows up, a shadowy enigma that comes to be called the Shivans, who are so powerful that the old antipathies are quickly forgotten, and Terrans and Vasudans unite to face the greatest threat either of their races has ever known.

Although neither its core gameplay model nor its fiction is remotely revolutionary, Freespace stands out for how well it executes on this derivative material. The graphics are exceptional for their era, the possibility space behind the controls expansive, the mission design uniformly solid. Inspiration in game design is wonderful, but we should never forget the value of perspiration. The people who made Freespace loved what they were doing enough to sweat every small detail, and it shows. The only place where the game fell down a bit back in the day was a somewhat under-baked multiplayer mode.

Interplay insisted on calling the game Descent: Freespace (“From the creators of Descent!”) in the hope of riding the coattails of the publisher’s biggest hit in recent memory. Whatever else you can say about it, it certainly wasn’t their worst exercise in Descent branding. (That would be Descent to Undermountain, an ill-advised attempt to use the old Parallax engine for, of all things, a Dungeons & Dragons-licensed CRPG.) And who knows? Maybe the branding even did some good. Upon its release in June of 1998, Freespace sold well enough to be modestly profitable for its studio and publisher and convince Interplay to fund an expansion pack and a sequel. The only catches were that Volition had to turn both out quickly, without spending too much money on them.

The expansion pack, which they called Silent Threat, ended up being short and perfunctory, the definition of inessential. The full-fledged sequel, however, was a minor miracle. It defied every cynical expectation raised by its abbreviated development cycle when it shipped on September 30, 1999.

Freespace 2 — Interplay allowed the cleaner name this time, perhaps to avoid confusion with the recently released Descent3 — did everything its predecessor had done well that much better, then added a finishing touch that it had lacked: a real sense of gravitas, provided largely by the one significant addition to the development team. Jason Scott (not to be confused with the archivist and Infocom documentarian of the same name) was Volition’s first dedicated writer. He made his presence felt with a campaign that was sometimes exhilarating, sometimes harrowing, but always riveting. The outer-space kitty-cats of Wing Commander, even Darth Vader and Emperor Palpatine, paled in comparison to the Shivans after Jason Scott got his hands on them. “The universe is very impersonal,” he says. “Your character is referred to only as ‘Pilot’ or ‘Alpha 1,’ and you’re up against countless waves of a seemingly unbeatable, genocidal adversary that never communicates its goals or motives. In the briefings, we tried to convey the sense of a much larger conflict unfolding in multiple systems, while at the same time hinting that your commanders weren’t telling you the whole story.”


Freespace 2 was never going to single-handedly rescue the space-sim sub-genre, but it did ensure that it went out on a high note. It’s a demanding game even by the usual standards of its kind, one that uses every key on the keyboard and then some, one that is guaranteed to leave you wishing you had more buttons on your joystick, no matter how nerdily baroque it might already be. Some of its more counter-intuitive commands, such as “target my target’s target,” have become memes in certain circles. Yet the developers are unapologetic. “We wanted players to feel like pilots in control of a complex, powerful, responsive, and technologically advanced machine,” says Jason Scott. “Complexity was a virtue.”

I’m almost tempted to write here that this was a shame, in that it put such a high barrier to entry in front of what was actually one of the more sophisticated ludic fictions of its era. My experience with the game probably isn’t unique: I struggled with it for a while, reached a point where I couldn’t seem to hit any enemy that I shot at even as said enemies had become all too good at hitting me, and wound up watching the rest on YouTube, as you do these days. On the other hand, though, why shouldn’t unabashedly demanding games that aren’t quite for me have good writing too?

Because you deserve to hear from someone other than a dabbler like me before we move on, I’m going to take the liberty of quoting Lee Hutchinson, who is a good friend of this site, a stalwart voice of reason in these increasingly unreasonable times of ours through his day job as a senior editor at Ars Technica, and, most importantly for our purposes, a hardcore space-sim junkie in all the ways that I am not. He can explain better than I can what Freespace 2 came to mean to its biggest fans, how it melded gameplay and narrative into an unforgettable roller-coaster ride.

If you’ve seen one of those simplified “evolution of man” charts, showing a chimp-like predecessor far at the left and an upright tool-using human all the way at the right, you’ve got a good idea of how Freespace 2 capped off the genre. It was the culmination of everything that had come before it, and every single gameplay element was refined and polished to a razor-sharp gleam.

Freespace 2 lets players experience a tremendous variety of missions in different fighters with a gamut of capabilities. Each mission is connected by an overarching plot: you may be ambushed while escorting some capital ships in one mission, and then in the next mission you might switch to flying a bomber and be assigned to take those capital ships out. You might be temporarily attached to a special-operations wing flying a prototype starship, or have to fly captured Shivan fighters in a deep-cover mission to scope out an enemy staging point, or deal with total mission failure and objective changes right in the middle of doing dozens of other things. Capital ships fire ridiculously large, ridiculously powerful beam weapons at each other, slicing each other to ribbons and providing a fantastic Babylon 5-esque backdrop while the player duels enemy fighters.

The targeting system is complex and rich; the wingman and escort system is complex and rich; the comms system is complex and rich. Everything about Freespace 2 shows care, love, and craftsmanship — from the chatter going back and forth between your wingmen as you blindly scout a nebula looking for a lost frigate, to the amazingly well-acted mission briefings. In practically every way, it is the Platonic ideal of a space-combat sim.

Starting at about the halfway point, Freespace 2 drops the hammer on the player with a series of tightly linked missions that absolutely do not let up. The war against the Shivans isn’t going well. A faction of Quisling-like humans is trying to defect to the Shivans’ side, taking a large chunk of the human military with it. At several points throughout the long campaign, it feels like the game is about to come to a crashing climax — only it doesn’t end. Things just get worse, and it’s an absolute rush to experience — flying your guts out, desperately trying to fight a rear-guard action against an unknowable enemy that seems to be totally unable to feel remorse, pity, or even fatigue.

I’ve never felt quite the combination of awe, fear, and eagerness I felt as I pushed through to Freespace 2’s endgame. There are lots of gaming experiences I wish I could relive for the first time, but playing Freespace 2 tops the list. That’s as good a way as any to judge a game as the best in its genre.

In the short term at least, Volition wasn’t rewarded very well for creating this game that Lee Hutchinson and more than a few others consider simply the best story-driven space sim ever made, the evolutionary end point of Chris Roberts’s original Wing Commander of 1990. Mike Kulas insists that Freespace 2 didn’t actually lose money for its studio or publisher, but it didn’t earn them much of anything either. Plans for a Freespace 3 were quietly shelved. Thus Freespace 2 came to mark the end of an era, not only for Volition but for computer gaming in general: while not quite the last space sim to be put out by a major publisher, it was the last that would go on to be remembered as a classic of its form.

What with there being no newer games that could compete with it, those who still loved the space sim clung all the tighter to Freespace 2 as the months since its release turned into years. They were incredibly lucky that Volition was staffed by genuinely nice, fair-minded people who felt their pain and were willing to “pay it forward,” as the saying goes. In 2002, Volition uploaded the full source code to Freespace 2 to the Internet for non-commercial use.

They couldn’t possibly have envisioned what followed. As of this writing, 23 years after that act of spontaneous generosity, the Freespace 2 engine has been improved and modernized almost beyond recognition, with support for eye-bleedingly high resolutions and all of the latest fancy graphical effects that my humble retro-gaming computers don’t even support. You can use the updated engine to play Freespace 1 and 2 and the Silent Threat expansion pack, in versions that have been polished to an even shinier gleam than the originals by the hands of hundreds of dedicated volunteers. Even more inspiringly, folks have used the technology to create a welter of new campaigns — effectively whole new space sims that run off what remains the best of all engines for this type of game.

The people who made Freespace 1 and 2 all those years ago are themselves awed by what their pair of discrete boxed computer games have been turned into. Freespace proved to be as much a new beginning as an ending. Long may the space sim fly on in the hands of those who love it most.



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Sources: Sierra On-Line’s customer newsletter InterAction of Spring 1999; Origin Systems’s internal newsletter Point of Origin of September 20 1996 and February 14 1997; Computer Gaming World of October 1994, February 1995, July 1997, April 1998, October 1998, November 1998, February 1999, July 1999, and January 2000; Retro Gamer 204.

Online sources include interviews with Jack Nichols and Randy Littlejohn on B5 Scrolls, “Growing Up Gaming: The Five Space Sims That Defined My Youth” by Lee Hutchinson at Ars Technica, an interview with some of the core members of the Freespace 2 team by the Space Game Junkie podcast, and a Game Informer documentary about Volition’s history.

Where to Get Them: Wing Commander I and IIWing Commander III: Heart of the TigerWing Commander IV: The Price of FreedomWing Commander: ProphecyX-WingTIE FighterX-Wing vs. TIE FighterX-Wing AllianceDescent: Freespace, and Freespace 2 are all available as digital purchases on GOG.com.

I strongly recommend that you run the Freespace games through the Freespace Open engine, even if you’re primarily looking for a retro experience. Both on native Windows 10 and running through WINE on Linux, I found the original Freespace to be subtly broken: I was given only a fraction of the time I ought to have been given to complete the last training mission. (This was not good at all, considering I’m rubbish at the game anyway.) Freespace Open is quite painless to install and maintain using a utility called Knossos. It will walk you through the setup process and then deliver a glitch-free game, whilst letting you select as many or as few modern niceties as you prefer.

Thursday, 06. November 2025

Renga in Blue

Ringen: Return of the

Æons ago, in the pre-pandemic year of 2019, I wrote about the Norwegian game Ringen, based on Lord of the Rings. I only knew about it from a vague reference in a list of Tolkien games which gave the game as being from 1979, written by “Hansen”, and later converted into a region of Genesis … … Continue reading →

Æons ago, in the pre-pandemic year of 2019, I wrote about the Norwegian game Ringen, based on Lord of the Rings. I only knew about it from a vague reference in a list of Tolkien games which gave the game as being from 1979, written by “Hansen”, and later converted into a region of Genesis MUD (that later made it to VikingMUD). VikingMUD’s section is still mostly the same as the original, so I was able to play through and theorize about what the original Ringen was like.

Back in September, two articles dropped on the site spillhistorie.no (run by Joachim Froholt) about rescued Norwegian games, both written by Robert Robichaud. The first was on SVHA Adventure (which I’ve now played) and the second was about an authentic version of Ringen in Norwegian. The game originated in 1983, not 1979, and was originally by Halvor Nilsen, not “Hanson”. There’s quite a lot of detail to the article and I am going to give a shorter summary here; the important thing to point out right away is there’s actually four versions: the original on mainframe, a port made to C64 done direct from the mainframe source code by Pål-Kristian and Per Arne Engstad, another port to DOS, and finally the leap to the MUD systems. Enough survives of the mainframe version it may eventually be restored, the C64 version is lost, and the DOS version is the one I’m about to play.

One curiosity about the title screen above is that it refers to Lord of the Rings using the title of the second translation of Lord of the Rings into Norwegian (“Ringenes Herre”), which came out in 1984, after the first version of the game Ringen. In 1983 the only translation available was one by Nils Werenskiolds in the early 70s (“Krigen om Ringen”) which was written in an old-fashioned “riksmål” style and is considered inferior.

From TolkeinGuide, the trilogy without dust jackets.

The University of Tromsø was the fourth university established in Norway (1968) after Bergen, Oslo, and Trondheim. All four obtained computer science programs. Of the four, Trondheim had more an engineering focus (with their MIT and Norsk Data links, see SVHA Adventure for more), Bergen emphasized numerical analysis, and Oslo included theoretical work on programming languages (with their first professor, Ole Johan Dahl, co-inventing the first object-oriented programming language). University of Tromsø was singular for, if nothing else, their location, still the farthest north on Earth of any university.

Their far-north position made them an optimal place to do astronomy and geophysical research (with phenomena like the Aurora Borealis); the Department of Physics is where their computing first started. Their computer science was hence of a pragmatic sort, working hand-in-hand with science, and through the 1970s leaning towards engineering. For example, they did work on the Tandberg line of terminals.

They were always small, and failed to break out as their own graduate college separate from math and science; according to a paper from History of Nordic Computing:

The department was the youngest and smallest of the four departments of the Faculty of Mathematical and Physical Sciences. As a result, it was constantly in the minority when the voting for lecturing capacity had taken place.

In the Fall 1983 term, a student named Halvor Nilsen decided to write an adventure based on Lord of the Rings, using Norwegian for the game rather than English.

It was mostly to test what I had learned during my studies on a “proper” project, partly because I was interested in both Tolkien and computer games.

The game was finished and popular by December; so popular that Nilsen added a time-limiting function in a January version.

Welcome text, via the mainframe Ringen source code.

Word of the game spread outside the school, and Pål-Kristian (age 15) and Per Arne Engstad (age 14) had heard about it. No story of stealth this time, they just asked for and got a login:

Getting into the University computer room was pretty easy. I just asked, and they gave me a username. Everything was fine as long as I behaved, was quiet, and let the students have their space if they needed it.

Having played it and wanting to have it on their home computer, they ported it to C64 (based on printed Pascal source code) and again later to DOS; they considered professional publication, but:

I was fifteen in the fall of 1985, and my brother was 16. At that time, the internet didn’t exist. There were no real game companies in Norway, I think. Who should we have turned to? In addition, it was never, at least as I remember it, the intention that we would make money from this. In any case, I was driven by the fact that it was incredibly exciting, both with the programming itself and also that it was possible to make games in a fairy tale world. We could have contacted Halvor to get something together, but we never did.

You can see the exact details on Rob’s post, including how it got ported to MUD systems. Regarding game companies in Norway, spillhistorie.no has a story about the Norwegian version of The Quill, but it is true they did not have a regular “gaming industry” making things easy like with the bedroom coders of England.

From spillhistorie.no, and we’ll return to this in 1984. The start of The Quill (English version) is coming soon to this blog.

The main difference between the mainframe and DOS versions is (allegedly) an exploration section cut at the start; the DOS version instead starts right in the action, as you’ll see in a moment.

To get into the DOS version the program asks for your name (and for it to be your real name, not something silly) and a date (which the game emphatically states must be a real one) in the format MM/DD-YY, with the “/” and “-” characters exactly. This might not seem like a challenge, but the Norwegian character set is needed to play (there’s a SETUP.BAT that will do that for you) which means the keys are changed. Shift-7 gave me a “/” and “/” gave me a “-“. I also found after some fiddling:

; gives ø or Ø
gives æ or Æ
[ gives å or Å

The game really does need the characters; you can type “på” (that is, “on”) to wear the One Ring if you have it, and “pa” does not work. If you are a Norwegian speaker, you may think “of course, pa is an entirely different thing, you wouldn’t treat that the same” but there are games like Skatte Jagt from this era that just ignore non-Latin characters. The spelling-substitute of “paa” doesn’t work either.

Letter blocks from Etsy including the three Danish/Norwegian characters.

The fortunate thing (from my perspective) is that the game contains a relatively complete verb-list in the instructions.

`Nord’,`Sør’,`Vest’, `Øst’,`Opp’,`Ned’: directions, first letters work so you can use “Ø” for east
`Av’, `På’: Wear or take off the ring
`Bruk’: Use (according to Rob’s article, this gets used generally for most objects)
`Kast’: Drop
`Se’: Look (get room description)
`Si’: Say
`Ta’: Take
`Undersøk’: Examine

Unlike the game Ring Quest where the player was essentially every character at once, Ringen squarely identifies the player as Frodo. You’re with the Fellowship, about to pass the Misty Mountains, when you are attacked by trolls and separated from the group; you lose the One Ring in the process. The action picks up with troll soldiers in hot pursuit; your goal is to enter Moria, find the One Ring, and escape on the other side (I will assume with a Balrog encounter somewhere).

Du er fanget mellom trollsoldatene og den glatte, kalde fjellveggen! Trollsoldatene beveger seg veldig raskt opp fjellstien du brukte for å flykte. Trøst og bær hvis du ikke kan komme deg unna!!

You are trapped between troll soldiers and the slippery mountain wall! They are moving quickly up the path you used to escape. Say your prayers now if you can’t get away!

I was stuck here for a bit; the player has no inventory and none of the directions work. I needed to catch on to the fact that the game lets you examine things embedded in descriptions (rather than separated as “items”); in this case, you can examine the mountain wall (“fjellveggen”).

Still checking vocabulary with image searches. Source.

Doing this reveals a message: “Ennyn Durin Aran Moria: / pedo mellon a minno. / Im Narvi hain echant: / Celebrimbor o Eregion / theithant i thiw hin.” Translated in Norwegian:

Durins Dører, Herren over Moria:
Tal, venn, og tred inn.
Jeg Narvi gjorde dem:
Celebrimbor av Eregion
risset disse runene.

This is the famous “say friend and enter” door. Unlike the MUD’s door where I needed to say “mellon”, this one uses the word “venn” (friend in Norwegian).

>si venn
Sakte deler fjellet seg foran deg, og en stor port glir utover. Innenfor kan du se ei mørk trapp. Plutselig skjer mye på en gang. Opp stien kommer trollsoldatene i stor fart rett mot deg ! Du rygger inn i porten, og i det samme smeller den igjen med stor kraft !! Du er fanget inne i fjellet !

Slowly the mountain splits before you, and a large gate slides open. Inside, you can see a dark staircase. Suddenly, everything happens at once. Up the path, the troll soldiers rush at you with great speed! You back into the gate, and it slams shut with great force! You are trapped in the mountain!

The game is fairly open from here, and I’m fairly slow at playing it (see: Norwegian, although it is close enough to Danish this isn’t as bad as I’d thought it would be). I’d like to share the first couple rooms just to get a sense of what the game is like.

Dette er et stort rundt rom.
En stor, støvete gang går mot øst, mens en liten, ubetydelig gang går nordover. Det er mange sprekker i taket; noen er små, mens andre er store nok til å krype inn i. Hullene er dessverre alt for langt oppe for at du skal klare å nå dem.

This is a large round room.
A large, dusty corridor goes east, while a small, insignificant corridor leads north. The ceiling has many cracks; some are small, others are large enough to crawl into. Unfortunately, the cracks are too high up to reach.

Heading east:

Steinkammeret.
Det er steiner overalt her inne. Dette kammeret må en gang ha blitt brukt til vaktrom, til tross for at det nå bare ligger gråstein på bakken her. Det er bare en utgang; mot vest.

Du hører lyden av lette fottrinn, og i den ene øyenkroken ser du en utydelig skygge som beveger seg langsomt.

Stone Chamber.
There are stones everywhere. This chamber must have once been used as a guard room, even though there is only grey stone on the ground. There is only one exit, to the west.

You hear the sound of footsteps, and in the corner of your eye you see a vague shadow move slowly.

I tried examining the shadow but was told everything I needed was in the text; it isn’t permanent so I’m not sure what’s going on here. Maybe examining the mountain to get the riddle was a one-shot thing.

Looking for “en utydelig skygge”. Source.

One more room for good measure; back to the start and then north:

Sørenden av et langt, lavt rom. Østveggen er overgrodd med fin, hvit mose, mens vestveggen er glatt og
trist. Gulvet her er nydelig utskjert i berget, men taket er ruflete og svært fuktig. Det er noen hull i øst- og vestveggene, og på ei steintavle nedfelt i gulvet står det risset med noen dvergeruner:
“Død over den som våger å røre Durins hellige øks!”
Du ser:
En liten vanndam.
Ei lita stridsøks tilsmurt med blod !!

South End of Long, Low Room
The east wall is overgrown with fine white moss, while the west wall is smooth and dull. The floor is beautifully carved into the rock, but the ceiling is ragged and quite damp. There are holes to the east and west walls, and on a stone tablet embedded in the floor there are written some dwarven runes: “Death to anyone who dares to touch Durin’s holy axe!”
You see:
A small pool of water.
A small battle axe smeared with blood!

You might think taking the axe would be Bad somehow but taking it doesn’t seem to have any effect. (Yet? Or maybe this isn’t the axe the message is referring to.)

Lots of exploration next time, and likely a big map. I’m going to approach this from scratch first before I compare with my original Ringen map (which already is very different, given the MUD had a large outdoors section).

Monday, 03. November 2025

Renga in Blue

Search for the Ruby Chalice (1983)

Last time I wrote about Polynesian Adventure, an entry into the Falsoft contest for Tandy CoCo adventure games. It was written by an older couple, whereas today’s selection was written by a 15-year old. The REM statements in the code mention this was written in “early 1982” so we have an idea of the lag … … Continue reading →

Last time I wrote about Polynesian Adventure, an entry into the Falsoft contest for Tandy CoCo adventure games. It was written by an older couple, whereas today’s selection was written by a 15-year old. The REM statements in the code mention this was written in “early 1982” so we have an idea of the lag on this one (the game was written before the contest was announced).

Justin Paola, a 15-year-old high school student living in Berkeley, Calif., is a frequent caller of his local computer bulletin board systems with his 64K, 2 disk Color Computer bulletin board system. His interests include computer graphics, movie special effects, and adventure games.

I’m assuming the blurbs are honest (unlike the Captain 80 Book which made biographical details up) as this was part of a running magazine as opposed to a one-shot book.

This game has some similarity with the previous game (being set on an island) but also strong contrast (being much more dangerous). Our goal is to land on a jungle island and find a ruby chalice deep underground, avoiding “head hunters” along the way. It’s like if Invincible Island didn’t have as many biomes (and was smaller and easier to solve).

The plane that we land on can be used for escape with the chalice (just type FLY here) although there’s a completely different method of escape available as well. I don’t know why. Playing a weird prank on our pilot?

You start, helpfully, with some supplies. The gun is useless, but not for the typical reason in adventure games (that it is meant as a red herring and violence isn’t the answer). Rather, sometimes at random you’ll get attacked by a WILD CAT and need to SHOOT CAT, but the game doesn’t bother to check if the gun is in your inventory when you do this.

I suppose finger pistols were sufficient.

The SNAKE BITE KIT is for moments where you might randomly get bitten by a snake, although I’ve gone through an entire trip without the bite happening (it’s rarer than the cat, at least). The MAGNIFYING GLASS as far as I can tell is 100% useless, and the MATCHES are used for lighting a torch which happens to be just west of here.

Weird the torch is out on the island, not in your supplies. For the cloth: THE CLOTH IS VERY INTERESTING – YOU BETTER KEEP IT.

The map is wide open from here.

There isn’t much in the way of empty space: it’s one object or interesting thing per room. Just nearby you can scoop up a GOLD NUGGET, JADE NECKLACE, COIL OF ROPE…

…TRANSLATION BOOK, KIWI FRUIT, a WATER JUG (as long as you have the torch lit, it is in a dark part of the jungle) and a SPEAR WITH STRANGE LETTERING.

For the spear, if you are carrying the translation book you can read the spear.

Remember, our only goal is to get the ruby chalice. That might make the jade necklace and gold nugget seem puzzling — there’s not even a score — but one room as “head hunters” and they demand a treasure if you wander in.

The bizarre thing is this isn’t a real obstacle — the map is wide open and you just can avoid this room. Essentially, the game includes a method of preventing death as long as you are trying to get as far as possible without reloading, but via the normal practice of playing adventures there’s no reason someone wouldn’t just mark the map square and never go to the spot again.

To the far north there’s an AIR CYLINDER and a RAFT; holding both lets you INFLATE RAFT (we’ll come back to that). There’s also a ROCK SLAB which “LOOKS LIKE IT HAS SLID OPEN AND CLOSED MANY TIMES” but is too heavy to move.

Solving this took a moment of cross-genre thinking. Maybe we’re in a fantasy game, or at least one where there’s much higher technology than it appears? Using the word XYKO from the spear opens up a cave.

This is the only other section of the game.

Just to the south of the entrance are some hieroglyphics; with the translation book in hand you can read that you ought to be carrying that ancient cloth from earlier before going east of the vipers.

The “written recently” aspect is interesting and puts more credence into the idea that the voice recognition was high tech rather than “magic”.

The aforementioned vipers are hanging out at a pit with a conveniently placed hook.

You can TIE ROPE in order to snag the hook, the SWING ROPE to go across.

There’s a boring corridor next, at least boring if you are holding the ancient cloth. If you aren’t, then you die.

And finally … the chalice! No more tricks, you can just take it and go.

You can then make a beeline back to the plane and win.

Alternately, for reasons I don’t understand, you can inflate the raft, use it on the river at the start, and float out to the ocean.

It’s clear the author (Justin Paola) was thinking of this more as “simulate a region using my computer” rather than a tightly threaded narrative. (A good comparison is Johnson’s Castle Dracula which was designed as a series of scenes fishing for particular reactions from the player.) The editors of Rainbow Magazine had enough fun that they gave it a co-award as runner-up (in the non-graphical category) with a game called Lighthouse Adventure we will play sometime in the future.

There’s a tree you can climb purely for the scenery.

If you’re thinking of your text adventure as world-simulation more than a series of scenes, it makes more sense to have gratuitous mechanics like the head hunters and the raft. (And technically also the water jug — if you’re fast enough you don’t need to bother, but the game comes with a thirst timer.) A scene-minded author like Peter Kirsch would never allow loose ends like that.

From the Falsoft book, an image printed with the source code.

Oddly enough, this may have manifested in Mr. Paola’s later career. After graduating high school, he went to Berkeley (Electrical Engineering, Computer Science) and then to the University of Arizona (remote sensing). He then worked on imaging-related projects like LANDSAT and other geographically linked technologies.

I developed multiprocessor image processing algorithms in a UNIX environment. These included terrain data algorithms such as slope, shadowing and incidence from elevation, and land-use classification from multispectral and SAR imagery. Responsible for terrain delimitation overlay production for large aerial regions in support of DARPA contract efforts.

Thus, his game reflects “simulate a geographic area” more than “create a story”. “Authors whose text adventures reflected on their later careers” might be a bit too niche, but we can also toss the recent Crypt of Medea in there with Arthur Britto’s tricky copy protection and maybe … Strange Adventure and the author going into astronomy? I’m drawing blanks here.

Coming up: Ringen returns.


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Author Interview: Paul Wang, “Hunter: The Reckoning—A Time of Monsters”

Topple the vampires from the streets below! Will you unite the homeless, the gangs, and the secret hunter societies to defy vampiric rule? Hunter: The Reckoning — A Time of Monsters is an interactive novel by Paul Wang, set in the World of Darkness, where your choices control the story. It’s entirely text-based, 1,000,000 words and hundreds of choices, without graphics or sound effects, and f

Topple the vampires from the streets below! Will you unite the homeless, the gangs, and the secret hunter societies to defy vampiric rule?

Hunter: The Reckoning — A Time of Monsters is an interactive novel by Paul Wang, set in the World of Darkness, where your choices control the story. It’s entirely text-based, 1,000,000 words and hundreds of choices, without graphics or sound effects, and fueled by the vast, unstoppable power of your imagination.

I sat down with Paul to talk about his upcoming game and experiences writing it. Hunter: The Reckoning — A Time of Monsters releases Thursday, November 13th. You can play the demo on Steam and wishlist the game in advance of release!

Our Choice of Games and Hosted Games fans all know you from your games with us, but our World of Darkness extended universe fans may not. Can you introduce yourself for those readers?

I’m Paul Wang, a first-generation Canadian living in Burnaby, which is one of the bigger municipalities of the Metro Vancouver area. I have an academic background in history – especially military history – but I started writing for Hosted Games and then Choice of Games when I was an undergrad, thirteen years ago. For the past decade or so, I’ve been working full time as a games writer.

I’m probably best known for my Dragoon Saga (Sabres of Infinity, Guns of Infinity, and Lords of Infinity) on the Hosted Games catalogue: a long-running blackpowder fantasy series set in my original setting of the Infinite Sea. I also write a high fantasy series (The Hero of Kendrickstone and The Cryptkeepers of Hallowford) set in another of my settings, the Fledgling Realms, for Choice of Games. A long, long time ago, I also wrote Mecha Ace – half military science fiction and half homage to ‘real robot’ anime like Mobile Suit Gundam. More recently, I worked as a writer on WW2 tactical RPG Burden of Command, which just released earlier this year.

Do you feel like A Time of Monsters represents a kind of progression in your work as an interactive storyteller?

As you can probably tell from my previous work, my writing has primarily focused on military and political fiction, with a side-helping of high adventure. This means I’m personally treading a lot of new ground by setting foot into urban fantasy and gothic punk. My first priorities have been mostly to get the tone and setting right. I’m writing a lot more conversationally and a lot more colloquially than I usually do, and that’s definitely been a change. The Dragoon Saga employs a sort of circumspect aristocratic register for its narrative voice, and even the Fledgling Realms is more rigid and formal. This time around, the narration is a lot looser – more stream of consciousness and more casual.

But at the same time, I’ve also tried to iterate on Hunter’s 5th Ed rules in a way which makes for an accessible gameplay experience in a way which I haven’t before. If there’s any consistent feedback I’ve gotten on my past games, it’s that they’re too hard and unforgiving, especially when it comes to skill checks. In a lot of cases, this isn’t so much a difficulty issue as it is an informational one: players take risks they think they can succeed at, only to get kicked in the face. This time around, I’m leaning heavily on the Storyteller System which previous Choice of Games’ World of Darkness titles have developed to give the player the tools to make decisions more effectively – should they choose to do so.

This doesn’t mean that I’m going to make things easy, of course. I interpret one of the core themes of Hunter as that of being the ultimate underdog – and you can’t sell an underdog story by making the player feel like they’re completely in control. I want the player to feel like they really are just ordinary base model H. Sap fighting an enemy which outclasses them in almost any way that matters. I want the desperation to be real, I want the fear to be real. That means I’ve spent a lot of time and effort trying to put the player in the position of weakness without making them feel helpless. I want the player to understand just how powerless they are at the beginning, so that if (not when, if) they’re able to turn the tables on their supernatural foes and make it to sunrise, they feel like they’ve earned that privilege.

Tying to maintain that balance between tone and accessibility has been one of the three big challenges of working on A Time of Monsters, and it’s one I desperately hope I’ve managed to nail.

Tell me a little about your background and experience with the World of Darkness and TTRPGs and/or LARPing.

My first experience with tabletop roleplaying games was when I got the Dungeons and Dragons 3.5 starter set at the age of twelve. In the twenty years since then, I’ve played 4th Ed, 5th Ed, Pathfinder, Savage Worlds, Dark Heresy, Shadowrun, Warhammer Fantasy Roleplay, Lancer, and Blades in the Dark.

But here’s the thing: aside from Vampire: The Masquerade—Bloodlines, I had never played anything – digital or tabletop – set in the World of Darkness. Not “Hunter: The Reckoning,” not “Werewolf: The Apocalypse,” not even “Vampire: The Masquerade.”

This meant that when I was approached to do “Hunter: The Reckoning,” I was starting almost completely fresh – but I was also starting fresh in a world inhabited by many, many people who care deeply about its characters, its history, and its lore.

So, like any newcomer looking not to step on anything dangerous, I looked for guides. When I began the writing process, I sought out playtesters who had the experience that I lacked. Some of them had been deeply involved in the old World of Darkness, some of them were running or playing campaigns in the current edition. One of them had been a “Vampire: The Masquerade” LARPer for almost as long as I’ve been alive. They’ve been the ones who’ve kept a close eye on my narrative as it’s progressed from plot outline to mechanical skeleton to fully-fledged game, and they’re the ones who’ve been keeping me honest through the whole process. If I’ve gotten any of it right, it’s only thanks to their efforts in educating me on a world which they know far more intimately than I do.

What will WOD fans find surprising about your approach to the world of Hunter in A Time of Monsters?

The one thing that stood out for me the most about Hunter was how it’s Gothic Punk in contrast to say, “Vampire: The Masquerade’s” Gothic Horror.

To me, “punk” is a genre which is inherently about power, specifically how those without it are caught up in the machinations of those who have it – and how those powerless, downtrodden bystanders choose to respond to being trampled on by those who may not even be willing to acknowledge their existence.

Most of the World of Darkness game line – and most of its adaptations – have, I think, focused primarily on the perspective of those with power over those who don’t. While a vampire can pretend that they’re a representative of the othered and the marginalised, that the hierarchy of their society shackles them, and the cost of their ‘curse’ robs them of their humanity, that line of argument rings rather hollow when you remember that vampires are still, for the most part, immortal nigh-indestructible superhumans with supernatural powers who inherently see normal mortal human beings as amusing pets at best and prey animals at worst. Their hierarchies constrain them, but they also empower them. Their powers come at a cost, but that hasn’t stopped them from amassing wealth, influence, and the ability to commit spontaneous violence on a scale no individual human can. They’re the equivalent of the privileged members of society who insist that they’re the real victims here, even as they stand richer and more powerful than the vast majority of their society, and even as their ‘victimhood’ consists solely of the fact that a small minority still exist ‘above’ them.

Which brings us to the Hunter.

The Hunter has no inherent supernatural abilities to fall back on. The Hunter has no hierarchy to call for help. The Hunter is a normal human with nothing but their own resources, going up against an enemy which they cannot survive a head-to-head one-on-one fight against: a normal person who’s seen just enough of this other world to know just how dangerous it is to themselves, their loved ones, and their communities.

Some Hunters have personal fortunes to rely on, training, resources, and connections – all factors that can help mitigate their relative weakness. Your Hunter will begin with none of those things. They are, in almost every sense of the word, starting with nothing, facing an enemy which not only outclasses them in every way, but which they have no chance of escaping from.

How they proceed from there is up to the player’s choices, and when inhabiting the life of someone at the bottom of any kind of society, every choice is a compromise. Do you trust those around you to help you, even if they’re barely keeping afloat themselves? Do you look further afield for more capable allies regardless of the cost they might exact? What lines do you cross to get the food and shelter you need to survive, or the weapons and equipment you need to take your fight to the enemy? What terrible people do you cozy up to for support? What awful systems do you perpetuate? Who do you risk helping? Who do you risk opening yourself up to? Who do you betray, if it means living to see another sunrise?

When someone’s back is against the wall and their stomach is empty and their entire future is an endless, hopeless war against a world which sees their existence as an inconvenience and an enemy which seems unstoppable, what kind of decisions do people make? What kind of decisions would you make? And are they ones which let you look in the mirror and say, with complete sincerity, that you are still a better person than the one your circumstances have tried to force you to be?

That, in essence, is my take on Hunter. I’m not sure if it’ll be surprising, especially given how many passionate veterans of the game line there are out there.

But that’s what I’ve got.

Was there a character you enjoyed writing most?

You know, come to think of it, I really enjoyed writing most of the major characters, but I think it was the player character I enjoyed writing the most.

Most of what I’ve written before has been, if not entirely archaic, then a lot more formal than what my conversational style is like. Writing an aristocrat in a Regency-analogue military setting, or even an adventurer in a high fantasy one doesn’t really let me cut loose quite as much as I would if I weren’t writing a certain type of person in a certain kind of place. That applies to the responses the player has access to as well. There are certain social boundaries which can’t be crossed, certain things which the genre conventions or the basic concept of the character doesn’t let you make them say.

But I’m not writing an aristocratic cavalry officer or a high fantasy adventurer or even a WW2-era company commander. This time, I’m writing someone who grew up in and inhabits the same society I do, which means they have a chance to be as irreverent and informal as I’d like to be sometimes – especially in the face of fear and hopelessness. I’ll stress that this is still a choice. They can choose to exhibit as much deference or defiance as they want – but the players who choose to play their Hunters as the kinds of people who don’t feel like they need to restrain themselves around their friends, or show false respect to their enemies, or simply want to occasionally let the intrusive thoughts win? They’ll have some real good material to work with.

If you were the PC in A Time of Monsters, what would your character sheet/customization look like?

To be honest? I have no idea.

I’ve taken a lot of liberties with the base system of “Hunter: The Reckoning.” This wasn’t out of some desire to ‘dumb down’ the mechanics so much as it was from the fact that I’ve always held to the belief that a game with meaningful character creation should have as few stats as it can possibly get away with – so that every point allocated and every character advancement choice made has significant weight.

For A Time of Monsters, this means I stripped down the stats system to its bare essentials – only the things a Hunter would need to survive and investigate and run and fight, no more, no less. Obviously, the base system was designed much the same way, but a system intended for a party-based tabletop game isn’t one that works well for a single-player Choicescript game which follows a single character. A well-balanced Hunter cell can fill all of the roles which the base system allows for, but in A Time of Monsters, you are not playing a well-balanced Hunter cell, unless you can find the allies to make one.

So all this is to kind of say ‘I don’t know’. I know what my strengths and weaknesses are, but I don’t have to go out at night looking for vampire lairs. I might know how strong I am in the gym or how smart I am in front of a desk – but in the dead of night with nothing but a flashlight and an ancient semi-automatic up against some thing which shouldn’t exist but is somehow still bearing down on me faster than any human could possibly move? I’d have no idea.

And I hope I never have the chance to find out.

Why did you choose to set A Time of Monsters in Vancouver?

Simply put? Because I live here.

I’ve lived in probably a dozen places in three countries over the course of my life, but this is the place I’d choose over everywhere else. I genuinely love it here, and I hope that love shows in the way I’ve portrayed not just the city of Vancouver itself, but the area around it, the people who live here, its often-conflicted history, and the culture of British Columbia’s Lower Mainland, as I see it.

Of course, loving a place means also acknowledging its faults, and Vancouver’s faults are ones which tend to create some rather deep hypocrisies: a global port home to multiple diasporas, yet built on land stolen from its original inhabitants; a place open to the world, but only if you can afford the sky-high cost of living; a metropolis which has the potential to be one of the greatest cities in the world but is being strangled by its refusal to grow in the ways that matter. It’s fabulous wealth next to excruciating poverty, high-tech infrastructure next to a spiralling housing shortage, world-class parks next to opioid addiction. It’s deeply complicated and deeply complex place, and part of the reason I chose to set A Time of Monsters here is that I want to show people how I see this city, about the problems it’s facing, and about why I love this place despite those problems.

The end result, I think, is a story which is unabashedly Canadian – and unabashedly Vancouverite. I don’t want my players mistaking the setting of A Time of Monsters for anywhere else in the world, and I’d like to think I’ve succeeded there. It’s almost certainly not a perfect representation, but it’s one which I feel is authentic to how I see the place where I live – and one which reflects my feelings towards it.


Renga in Blue

Polynesian Adventure: Virtual Vacation

(Continued from my last post.) I’ve finished the game. Given it was a 7k-byte type-in, it seemed inevitable, and it turns out there are almost no puzzles, but I had trouble anyway due to a particular decision by the authors. (And it is authors, plural, I’ll get into that later.) The general pattern, from the … … Continue reading →

(Continued from my last post.)

I’ve finished the game. Given it was a 7k-byte type-in, it seemed inevitable, and it turns out there are almost no puzzles, but I had trouble anyway due to a particular decision by the authors. (And it is authors, plural, I’ll get into that later.)

The general pattern, from the starting point, is to hop on the Love Boat, then visit six islands in sequence, then go back to the start. If you ride the boat yet again you’ll go through the sequence as many times as you like. This pattern of a treasure-hunt where you rotate through the destinations has shown up in Alaskan Adventure but given that was in a December issue of Softside it is unlikely to have had an influence. (Also, unlike that game, this game doesn’t necessarily require a repeat, although for the one puzzle there is a good chance you’ll need to loop around.)

The main destinations are marked, although it is unknown where the player starts. I also didn’t work out exactly where the Maori village of the game might be in New Zealand.

Before plunging ahead, I should also highlight that the treasure hunting feels uncomfortable this time around. “You are in Maori Museum. You see: *valuable relics*.” Taken in a literal sense, this is a story of visiting some islands on a tourist boat and stealing their stuff. However, I don’t think the authors designed it in that sense. Rather, this is meant to be a light visit to some destinations and the presence of “treasures” in an abstract way of making it a game. (Think of them as replicas being found as part of a scavenger hunt, if that helps.) If the game was written later when puzzle-less was established more as a genre, I suspect they might instead make something like The Cove from 2000, which is purely all about exploring an environment and finding neat animals.

Picking up from last time, I was stuck with the parser command for filling a car with gas. It turns out that the game is fishing for a noun not mentioned in the text: FILL TANK. The really big issue is that if you try FILL CAR the game says you don’t have everything you need yet, leading players down the wrong path. This is a strong demonstration of how important unambiguous errors messages can be in making a parser game manageable.

The trick I was thinking of last time would have worked — you can jump to the boat with the PICK command, where it chastises you for picking flowers and teleports you to the boat. However, you do need to move the Trans Am in order to get back to the start.

READ PASS (from the boarding pass in the car) gets the message

YOUR CABIN NUMBER IS G7 AND YOUR TABLE NUMBER IS A1

and while at the tables, you can GO A1 to arrive at a table; while at the cabins you can GO G7. (Again, the error message you get otherwise isn’t super helpful, and I just took a shot in the dark at the specific letter/number being odd to mention.)

The table, A1, has some *silverware* which is the first treasure. (Again, the treasure collecting is super odd if we try to imagine it’s a “real” narrative.) I used this place as my stash point for treasures as I collected them whilst traversing the six islands.

By entering the cabin, G7, the boat starts to move. When you disembark you end up on the next island in the sequence. Here’s all of them, and the sequence is left to right then top to bottom:

At the first destination, Samoa, you can:

  • try to take the pink hibiscus you see and then get kicked back on the boat for breaking rules
  • go to a “Council House” which has a “basket full of pearls” you can freely take
  • see a fire knife dancer; there’s no text message, just a musical ditty which implies you are watching the dancing

I have the music in the clip below. Note that the “beep” that happens upon entering a room happens upon entering every single room of the game, every single time.

There are no obstacles other than avoiding the flower-based rules. The combination of parts is why I say it doesn’t seem like you’re doing a robbery; it’s showing off brief elements of place like it was a virtual travel tour or the clues of a Carmen Sandiego game (although baskets are associated with more islands than just Samoa).

Next is a Maori Village where you scarf valuable relics from a museum, and visit a Meeting House and a Lagoon while you are at it. (The closest I could find to this description is Whakarewarewa, video below.)

Next is a Fiji Village where you can find some Tongan coins (used later automatically — I never figured out where, they just disappeared) and a “diamond headed spear” in a “chief’s house”.

Next comes Tahiti, where the *Tahitian orchid* and *carving of a fish* count as the two treasures, and you find Boy Scouts singing for some reason.

Then comes Tonga, with a tropical waterfall…

…a Tongan festival with free hula lessons…

…a Queen’s Bedroom (with a bird of paradise) and a Queen’s Bed (with a *beautiful woven mat*).

Last comes the Marquesas Village, which lands the player at an “active volcano” and has a guest house…

…a warrior’s house (with treasure)…

…and a cooking house, with a knife that is too hot.

The knife is the only real puzzle in the game (past the pesky parser business at the start). I realized the can that held the gas might hold water too, but got stuck for a while because I assumed the “waterfall” was the right place to fill up. Hence I started trying more and more outrageous parser messages, before finally realizing the “lagoon” from earlier could also have water. FILL CAN worked there; then I was able to POUR at the knife.

Then the remainder of the game was ferrying the remaining treasures back to the start.

I tried to check if the words earlier (like HA’E TOA for WARRIOR’S HOUSE) were from some actual indigenous language. If the only option was Marquesan, the answer seems to be no, but there’s multiple languages and dialects to account for and this is the sort of thing online resources are pretty bad at. It’s worth checking because this might represent the first time an indigenous language is represented in a computer game. (It is also of course possible the authors made those parts up, but that seems like an odd thing to make up.)

Earlier I mentioned there were two authors. The REM statements of the BASIC source mention Don and Linda Dunlap of Reynoldsburg, Ohio. The contest book only mentions Don Dunlap. I’m not sure if there was some one-person rule they were using but I’m going to change my links to mention both people.

From the perspective of the Falsoft people running the game, I could see how they perceived this as a “cute” sort of game which is a bit different from the norm so worth printing (“It is an enchanting land of adventure, charm and intrigue that seems apart from the rest of the world.”); they maybe also realized the HELP function worked to mention the FILL TANK issue that I was stuck on. Maybe they were more impressed with the sound than I was (at least, there are tiny bits of music throughout that substitute for visuals, albeit in a crude-old-computer-speaker way — the Boy Scouts singing and the Hula section are both included).

Coming up: another contest game from the book, followed by the recently-unearthed Tolkien game in Norwegian which has long been one of my Holy Grails.

Sunday, 02. November 2025

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Saturday, 01. November 2025

Renga in Blue

Polynesian Adventure (1983)

This continues the story, more or less, from Rainbow Adventure (1982). I knew I had this particular set of games looming, and since the results of IFComp 2025 were announced a few weeks ago it seemed like the appropriate moment to start. To recap from that post about Rainbow Adventure, text adventure creation competitions have … … Continue reading →

This continues the story, more or less, from Rainbow Adventure (1982). I knew I had this particular set of games looming, and since the results of IFComp 2025 were announced a few weeks ago it seemed like the appropriate moment to start.

Congrats to Ben Jackson who wrote the IFComp 2025 winner, Detritus, which received the highest voting average of any game entered in any of the years of the competition (as far back as data exists).

To recap from that post about Rainbow Adventure, text adventure creation competitions have long been a feature of the computing world (the previously mentioned IFComp has now run every year starting in 1995); the very first one came from publishing company Falsoft for their platform of choice, the Tandy Color Computer. While there had been plenty of adventures for TRS-80 (with Scott Adams leading the charge) there were less out for Tandy’s color machine (with less text resolution). Scott Adams hadn’t made it yet to CoCo, so when Lawrence C. Falk of Falsoft went to play an adventure game on his own system after seeing one on others, he didn’t have any choices.

I had just finished reading Byte’s Adventure issue of December, 1981, and seen one of Scott Adams’ famous Adventures on an Apple computer at my not-too-friendly local computer store. Just the day before I had discovered how to get by the snake in the Colossal Cave. But I wanted to play an Adventure on my CoCo.

The gaping hole led him to writing his own, but it was a private game, not a published one.

When Falk started publishing the Rainbow, there were some adventure submissions, and it led him wanting to have an entire book of them: hence, a contest. There were thirteen winners declared (that were printed in a compilation book); results were announced in the January 1983 edition of the Rainbow. As confirmed by L. Curtis Boyle, the Rainbow’s cover month matched the publication month, so January is correct (no shift back by a month); it does mean also that likely all the Falsoft contest games were written in 1982, even ones that don’t have a date listed in their comments.

Scott Adams and Infocom did finally make it to Tandy CoCo, but not until later in 1983 (Release 30 of Zork I was compiled in March). So at this point in time, the adventure universe was still very small for this system, and the book added a substantial new library.

Based on the magazine copy this seems to have been an honest to goodness contest and not just a situation where they published everything that was sent: “We’ve painstakingly whittled down the numbers to settle on a baker’s dozen.” (This may have been exaggerated.) Other than the two winners (one text game and one graphical game, which landed in that January 1983 issue of Rainbow on top of being in the book) the entries were not sorted but instead listed by alphabetical order.

GREGORY CLARK of Syracuse, New York, for Sir Randolf of the Moors
DON DUNLAP of Reynoldsburg, Ohio, for The Polynesian Adventure
CHRIS HARLAND of Regina, Saskatchewan, Canada, for The Deed of the York
ROBERT W. MANGUM. II of Titusville, Florida, for Horror House
JORGE MIR of New Berlin, Wisconsin, for Dreamer
JORGE MIR of New Berlin, Wisconsin, for Oneroom
JUSTIN PAOLA of Berkeley. California, for Search for the Ruby Chalice
GREGORY RICKETTS of Columbus, Ohio, for Dungeon Adventure
JEAN ROSEBOROUGH of New Berlin, Wisconsin, for Door
STEVE SHERRARD of Normal, Illinois, for Dungeon Adventure
SCOTT SLOMIANY of Downer’s Grove, Illinois, for Dr. Avaloe
RICK TOWNSEND of Bettendorf, Iowa, for Escape from Sparta
CHRIS WILKINSON of Larchmont, New York, for Lighthouse Adventure

The order is different in the book, and I’m starting with the first one in the book, Polynesian Adventure. The winners are in the middle, so again, no “ranking” logic. I’m not playing fully in sequence because some games group well together, but the start of the book seemed as logical a place to begin as any.

Each game includes a brief biography; here’s Don Dunlap’s:

Don Dunlap has been a professional programmer for 17 years. He is president of his employer-based computer club with nearly 350 members. He teaches BASIC, and also serves as a volunteer computer consultant and speaker for area schools, libraries, and civic groups.

This presents a puzzle if all 17 years were from Ohio (which may not be a correct assumption). The first computer science department in Ohio didn’t even start until 1969, with Bowling Green. My guess would be he worked for Nationwide Insurance and commuted to Columbus; although I don’t know what their computing was like, insurance companies did get on the programming bandwagon early. (If he moved or even just changed companies, there are other options out of Ohio in 1983, the most prominent being Compuserve.)

Color seems to be a major feature of the game so I didn’t switch to black-and-white this time. All that really happens is that colors switch randomly every few turns.

Our goal is to go over to a boat and find treasures, bringing them back to the Polynesian House at the start. I have found zero treasures, and you’ll see why in a moment.

Gameplay starts in a small set of rooms (seen above) where the goal simply seems to be to get in your car (a Trans Am) and drive over to where you’ll find the boat. The car is lacking in gas.

To the west is a discount store with an empty gas can (you can just grab it) and to the east is a gas station (FILL CAN works) but then try as I might I can’t put the two things together. Nor does DRIVE CAR work (I assume because of the gas). There’s a GLOVE COMPARTMENT with a BOARDING PASS for the boat, but in this area that’s as far as I’ve gotten. FILL CAR while at the car holding a filled gas can just gets the response YOU’RE MISSING SOMETHING.

I did my usual verb list…

Incredibly small, and I’ll go into SMELL and PICK in a moment.

…to which I can add DRIVE, but not REFUEL or SIPHON; I suspect FILL really is the right verb, but what could I be missing given the absolutely minimalist constraints? There’s no descriptions. The discount store is just YOU ARE IN DISCOUNT STORE with nothing else implied.

From here I might be tempted to hit the source code already, but I made some progress in a bizarre way. While testing my verb list, and reaching SMELL, I had a strange response about being stung by a bee and being sent back to the boat. This wasn’t replicable either. (Maybe some bug put me in proximity of the “flowers”?) I also had a weird reaction with PICK, which usually says I DON’T UNDERSTAND (verb known, but doesn’t make sense in the room) but I was able to (while in the car) get it to give me a response about not being allowed to pick the flowers, and I got sent back to the same boat.

Love, exciting and new / Come aboard, we’re expecting you

I hoped this would open up the main part of the game so I could play (with the caveat that maybe return is impossible) but alas, this only opens up another small four-room area.

I took some stabs in the dark, like GO TABLE in the dining room or GO CABIN in the cabin area, but no dice.

Again, by now I’d normally be plunging into source code, but the weird glitch has me interested enough to try stabbing at the problem a while longer. If anyone wants to take a shot themselves, you can download the game here and then use XRoar Online (link in the upper right) to run the file.

Thursday, 30. October 2025

Renga in Blue

Takara Building Adventure Part 1 (1982)

The last time I wrote about a Japanese game was with The Palms, where I mentioned skipping over two games from 1982 because there were no copies available. This was one of them. Brief history recap: Japan’s efforts in adventures kicked off with Omotesando Adventure (1982, written in English by ASCII for a special April […]

The last time I wrote about a Japanese game was with The Palms, where I mentioned skipping over two games from 1982 because there were no copies available. This was one of them.

Via bsittler of Gaming Alexandria. I’ve decided to use the name from the title screen of the game rather than the tape case.

Brief history recap: Japan’s efforts in adventures kicked off with Omotesando Adventure (1982, written in English by ASCII for a special April Fools insert in their magazine); the goal was to sneak into ASCII’s own headquarters and cause sabotage (and set a precedent for games after to involve the company making them in the plot somehow). This was followed by Mystery House from Micro Cabin which introduced graphics, followed by a sequel three months later. They then published Diamond Adventure and today’s game near the end of the year, before the floodgates started to truly open (I have more than 50 Japanese games listed for 1983).

Takara Building Adventure (for early Sharp computers like the MZ-80K) was written when Akimasa Tako was in junior high (in Japan, ages 12-15) but unlike our other young authors, he didn’t send his game off to the publisher (Micro Cabin) with fingers crossed. He made the game “just for friends” but “it was released without my knowledge.”

Akisma Tako from a 2017 panel in Tokyo about Micro Cabin.

It was hence a private game according to his own words, although it riffs off the same “corporate stealth” plot as Omotesando, Diamond Adventure, and some games we haven’t reached yet. I am somewhat confused since the goal here is to sneak into Micro Cabin’s office, yet it wasn’t written for them. The Micro Cabin influence is strong, though, so maybe it was a fan-work of sorts. Given Tako did get royalties, he must have been contacted by the company first before it hit store shelves, so it could have been retro-fitted.

It sold 2,000 copies which was respectable for the market at the time, but not enough to “get rich”: he received 50,000 yen from the proceeds. (In 2025, that’s about 71,000 yen, or $470 in US dollars.) Mystery House itself, on the other hand, sold so many copies it literally paid for the building that Micro Cabin was housed in.

The game is split into two parts, sold as separate items. Most references don’t have the two versions listed separately.

Screens from a Yahoo auction of part 2, just to demonstrate it is definitely a distinct version.

The game kicks off with an animation where a small person enters a building, then gets flung out of the Micro Cabin window and dies on the street below. Then you enter stage left: now it is your turn. Your job is to make it to the Micro Cabin offices, alive.

You start at the front door, with 1000 yen in your pocket, next to a vending machine.

Before checking out the vending machine, let’s wander briefly. South runs into the (not yet open) door, east and west don’t work, and north turns to a “garbage character” screen.

With a comment from Matt T. and consultation from some Gaming Alexandria people, this is basically “my eyes are blocked by junk”, but it’s the double joke that the screen is filled with garbage characters. The main point is the player can’t see ahead of them. It’s a little like Adventureland where you wander into a memory chip.

Head farther north and the game is over.

You stagger out into the street and get run over by an ambulance that just happened to be passing. Rest in peace.

Back to the start, you can take some of your 1000 yen and BUY JUICE (this spends ¥90), or rather, BUY (hit enter) JUICE (hit enter); you can also OPEN / DOOR and go south to get inside.

WEST will turn the player west here, facing a cigarette machine; you can BUY / CIGARETTE for ¥150.

On directions, this is designed halfway to the Mystery House System. You can’t look in a direction if there’s nothing interesting, but if there is something there, you will turn rather than walk that way. Notice how the compass changed.

Head farther south and you will be able to look in all four directions.

“Beyond here is dangerous, entry prohibited.”

Trying to beat the barricade just chastises the player with NO! (…Mystery House flashbacks…) but the Oasis is open.

The way purchases work is you pick the items (and they have limited stock, so you can’t buy, say, more than one beer) and then check out, and if you exceed what you’re holding (remember it started at 1000 yen, and you may already have bought juices/cigarettes) the police come.

This animates the police car moving to the left.

If you buy the BEER and then turn over to the person guarding the barricade, you can GIVE BEER. They will ask if you want to share some; if you say NO they will end up wandering off drunk. That’s 400 yen left (assuming you hadn’t bought anything else).

This lets you go farther, to the fire alarm on the wall. You can turn to find a stair leading up…

…where of course going up is fatal (you fall). Turning around there’s an elevator, but you get similarly stalled by a giant person inside.

If you GIVE JUICE they’ll go away and you can go inside. This wins the game, which tells you to go on to play volume 2.

To the far right that’s “Poor Mr. Tako. Only his arm is depicted.”

To summarize the plot: you buy a juice outside, and a beer inside. You do one bribe with beer, then with juice, and then you win the game. The only difficulty was in spending money wisely.

This really does feel like a private game. A great deal of work went into the rendering the scenes and telling in-jokes. There’s also no generalized parser, each room has the parser commands custom-listed:

4060 IF(IN$=”PUSH”)*(R=0)THENGOSUB120:IFIN$=”BUTTON”THENR=1:GOTO4170
4070 IF(IN$=”GIVE”)*(S=0)THENGOSUB120:IF(IN$=”JUICE”)*(JU>0)THEN4150
4080 IF(IN$=”S”)*(R=1)*(S=1)THEN5010
4090 IF(IN$=”S”)*(R=1)*(S=0)THEN4210
4100 IFIN$=”W”THENS=0:R=0:GOTO3710
4110 IFIN$=”N”THENS=0:R=0:GOTO3810
4120 IFIN$=”E”THENS=0:R=0:GOTO3010

If I was playing these for the sheer games-in-themselves, I would be a bit disappointed. As a piece of pure history, this is wonderful. This is still the “hardscrabble” phase for Japanese adventures — the very start of people making their own — and this shows the author constructing a multi-direction world piece by piece with a limited MZ-80K machine. The character-drawing set leads to some great touches, like the “Oasis” logo or the attempts at perspective drawing. Also, the early-mover aspect — the third or fourth adventure written in Japanese — means it is possible this game influenced something more serious that came out later (there’s many Japanese adventures coming, so we’ll just have to file that for later).

If nothing else, it got Akimasa Tako into the game industry. He did another game with Microcabin adventure based on Alice in Wonderland, then later worked on games like Princess Maker 2 and Shenmue.

While we don’t have part 2 available (yet) you can take a look at a walkthrough here if you’re truly curious what happens (there’s an early minigame which apparently is a serious headache).

Thanks to Video Game King on Gaming Alexandria for help with a translation, and bsittler for scanning and sharing the previously missing game. (Download is here for a package, where save state 1 starts right before the introduction, and save state 2 starts where the player can put input. Remember that verb and noun are typed separately. Also note early Sharp computers didn’t have a backspace, so “delete” is the same as backspace. A larger package here includes more scans and notes from bsittler.)


Zarf Updates

I'm giving a talk at ThinkyCon

I'm on the schedule for ThinkyCon 2025! Towers of Pen: puzzle experiences that zoom out and out Me! Thursday, November 6th 4:00 - 4:30 pm (Eastern time) What does it mean to take a puzzle to the next level? In Hadean Lands (parser IF, 2014) ...

I'm on the schedule for ThinkyCon 2025!

Towers of Pen: puzzle experiences that zoom out and out

  • Me!
  • Thursday, November 6th
  • 4:00 - 4:30 pm (Eastern time)

What does it mean to take a puzzle to the next level? In Hadean Lands (parser IF, 2014) I designed a game where every solved puzzle "collapses" to become a single move in a larger puzzle. And larger still, and so on... Other games have taken a similar tack, notably Baba Is You.

What does it mean for a game to "scale up" in this way? Is it different from the familiar concept of the metapuzzle? (Spoiler: yes.) What kinds of puzzles are amenable to this scaling idea? And why is it so awesome, anyway?

ThinkyCon is a free online three-day event for and by puzzle game developers. There's lots of other great speakers, including FLEB, Patrick Traynor, and Tonda Ros. I hope you can drop in.

Tuesday, 28. October 2025

Renga in Blue

Fairytale: Bane of Giants

(Continued from my previous posts.) I’ve finished the game. This was far more elaborate than I expected and it might verge into a “good” game if some of the dodgier design choices were tweaked. It certainly is not the game a child would likely solve on their own (despite it being positioned as a children’s […]

(Continued from my previous posts.)

I’ve finished the game. This was far more elaborate than I expected and it might verge into a “good” game if some of the dodgier design choices were tweaked. It certainly is not the game a child would likely solve on their own (despite it being positioned as a children’s game by Molimerx).

Basic adventure mainly aimed at the kids but for all the family! Uses a scenario of nursery rhymes and fairytales within which to find the treasures.

Last time I was stuck with the palace/parlour and trying to get the pie to do something, and planting a “ruby seed”. I ended up making progress not being thinking of the goals but thinking of the verbs and objects I had available I hadn’t used yet.

CUT, DIG, READ, DRINK, EAT, LOCK, TIE, POUR, PULL, MOVE, MAKE, WEAR, GIVE, EXAMINE, BUY, KISS, PLAY, COOK, FOLLOW, CHOP, PLANT

Of the verbs, TIE came to mind as notably unused (and there’s no equivalent UNTIE to match). I still had a “line” from the maid which previously had laundry, and I had a and I thought where a rope might go, and I faintly remembered that at the dog/cat/moon/etc. scene when the cow appears, you can try to take it, but it give the message “it keeps escaping”. On something else (like the moon) the game just says you can’t do that; I had mentally shelved the two things together but that was a mistake. It is possible to TIE COW.

Now the cow is portable! Or at least it takes as much inventory space as a piece of toffee does. But what to do with a cow?

I admit getting distracted for a while thinking of the spiders back in the shed, and maybe somehow re-creating the curds/whey scene, but none of them are giant spiders (in fact, the spiders are entirely a red herring).

The cow instead goes to the pedlar…

…and it was only after this moment I remembered Jack in the story traded a cow for beans, rather than money. I perceived the “ruby” part of the bean earlier as just a modification of the story, but there are instead two beans, the ruby one and the regular one.

You might incidentally notice the pedlar has disappeared; he just has moved to a new place, outside the hut (where the murder of an old lady happened). So you can also give over the money to get a ruby bean too and that just counts as a treasure in itself. (There’s some maybe-softlocks here, as forewarned by Voltgloss in the comments. If you get the ruby bean first the pedlar doesn’t move, and then if you get the regular bean after he moves and the ruby bean moves. I eventually found the ruby bean back at the pedlar sign even though I had it stashed at the candy-house. Something went awry in the coding here.)

Now that I had the right seed, I almost had enough to plant the seed, but I still was missing a parser command, because straight PLANT SEED doesn’t work. You need to first DIG HOLE (a noun not appearing in the game, you just need to come up with it), followed by PLANT SEED, DROP MANURE, and POUR WATER.

Predictably, this makes a beanstalk you can climb up…

…but I’m going to wait on going inside and meeting the giant, because I solved the puzzle inside last.

Rather than puzzle-solving or verb-solving I switched to item-solving and thought about what I had left I hadn’t used. The plastic mac (“raincoat”) in particular was prominent and unused and almost certainly had to go somewhere, yet I had only found water in one place.

I maybe was deceived by playing the illustrated version of the game; this doesn’t look like the sort of waterfall with a secret cave, but it is absolutely the kind of waterfall with a secret cave. One GO CAVE while wearing the mac later:

Going west kills you from here and the game is never clear why.

MOVE ROCK opens a passage, which you can go through to find a cottage.

The honey and pliers are two other items I hadn’t used yet, which is why I was holding them at this moment.

Notice the knife! I’ll refer to it later.

Combining comments from Voltgloss and arcanetrivia helped here. Voltgloss mentioned that Saucepanman will take other gifts other than just oats (I used the sugar from candy-house in the end) and arcanetrivia suggested making porridge out of oats. It was messy to work out still, because you need to GRIND OATS first (mortal and pestle, which ground the bones last time) and then MAKE PORRIDGE while holding a saucepan with water.

Or as I’ve typed here, MAKE PORR, as the game only looks at the first three letters of each word.

Heading back west, you can POUR (PORR)IDGE and make some bears happy…

…but now Goldilocks is sad. (It’s funny how in the Red Riding Hood story you just see the aftermath, and here you instigate the whole thing.) I had been toting around the honey; dropping the honey first distracts the bears, so Goldilocks can get some of the porridge and give a GOLDEN LOCK as a prize.

Drawn here as a literal padlock.

That’s everything for that side-story (the lock goes with the treasures), but the knife is useful! I had tried to CUT PIE at one point and the game crashed, which suggests right-action-wrong-conditions. Cutting a pie with an axe might be considered a bit much, but what about a knife?

The amber claw that’s in the room description is the result, the birds aren’t useful for anything.

I was then on the last puzzle of the game, the giant.

The giant starts non-aggressive but wide awake. I puzzled out that getting the tooth was needed, and the pliers (of my unused objects) would come in handy, but it was impossible to just yank right away.

I thought this was the best puzzle of the game, but as I’ve already mentioned, I like the cross-lore puzzles. Jack deals with a sleeping giant, but in this case we need to make the giant sleeping. What have we already seen that might help cause sleepiness?

The needle that pricked Sleeping Beauty! It counts as a treasure so I had it stashed. With the giant asleep you can now PULL TOOTH (which counts as a treasure) but that wakes the giant up, who is now definitely not peaceful. You can at least run away, and can even go back down the beanstalk, but eventually the giant gets you and you die.

Again, cross-lore works here.

The axe that was used at the Battle of Grandma’s House strikes again! It took down both a Big Bad Wolf and a Giant. Get it framed.

The moment before I realized the ruby had moved from the candy-house to the place where the pedlar had been.

As I started with, this verged near to a “good” game, ruined by some unfair elements. I especially liked the items being passed around the stories, and I made a chart of the more iconic items and how they get shuffled.

That’s genuinely clever design and I’d love to try Keith Campbell’s next two games to see if he shakes off doing so many softlocks, but neither is available in any form. Stott also wrote Goblin Adventure in 1990 along with his ports but it’s an original game. So Wonderland and Dreamworld will have to wait and see if either the BBC Micro or TRS-80 versions turn up somewhere. We still have three more of his games to go: a demo game from his book published with Melbourne House (The Computer & Video Games Book Of Adventure) followed by two games in 1984, The Vespozian Incident and The Pen And The Dark.

Coming up: a previously lost game.


Key & Compass Blog

New walkthroughs for October 2025

On Tueday, October 28, 2025, I published new walkthroughs for the games and stories listed below! Some of these were paid for by my wonderful patrons at Patreon. Please consider supporting me to make even more new walkthroughs for works of interactive fiction at Patreon and Ko-fi. The Wizard Sniffer (2017) by Buster Hudson In […]

On Tueday, October 28, 2025, I published new walkthroughs for the games and stories listed below! Some of these were paid for by my wonderful patrons at Patreon. Please consider supporting me to make even more new walkthroughs for works of interactive fiction at Patreon and Ko-fi.


The Wizard Sniffer (2017) by Buster Hudson

In this fantasy game, you play as a female pig who was sold to a dim-witted knight as a wizard sniffer. You cannot actually sniff out evil wizards, but here you are, outside the Impenetrable Keep you escaped from only two nights ago. You think it’s in your best interest to play the part as best you can. For now.

This game was an entry in IF Comp 2017 where it won 1st place overall and also the Miss Congeniality award. At the 2017 XYZZY Awards, it won the Best Game, the Best Story, the Best NPCs, the Best Individual Puzzle, and the Best Individual NPC awards; it was also the finalist in a sixth category (Best Puzzles). In the 2019 edition of the Interactive Fiction Top 50 of All Time, this game ranked at 13th place.

IFDB | My walkthrough and maps


Frankenfingers (2025) by Charles Moore, Jr.

Inside this game, beware the name of Victor Frankenstein.
His secret arts use body parts, and one of them is mine!
I move and see and hear and yet I’m just a severed hand
Reanimated in this crypt without my wedding band.
Where can I go, what should I do with this strange borrowed life?
Can I escape? Can I go home and find my grieving wife?

This game was written in Dialog and was an entry in IF Comp 2025 where it took 31st place.

IFDB | My walkthrough and maps


Phobos – A Galaxy Jones Story (2025) by Phil Riley

In this sci-fi espionage game, you again play as the hero Galaxy Jones. Sirius Syndicate cyborgs have turned Phobos into a giant missile and intend to smash Mars with it. Your mission is to sneak into their secret base on Phobos and stop them. And don’t kill anyone unnecessarily. Save who you can.

This game is an entry in IF Comp 2025 where it took 10th place.

IFDB | My walkthrough and map


Willy’s Manor (2025) by Josh Hetzel

In this mildly-silly puzzle game, you play as a producer who wants to get Willy, the eccentric billionaire owner of an international novelty company, on his TV show. Willy will do it if you pass a “test” in his manor first.

This game was an entry in IF Comp 2025 where it took 62nd place.

IFDB | My walkthrough and map


Dreadwine (2006) by Eric Eve

In this retelling of a dream, you find yourself in a crowded yet strangely-quiet café with O’Brien and Sandra. O’Brien tells you that people are taken to the castle and turned into wine. Sandra knows she’s next and has lost all hope. But there must be a way to escape this town and save Sandra! Isn’t there?

This game was an entry in the MC Dream mini-comp, also called the IF Dreams 2006.

IFDB | My walkthrough and map


The Gate (2004) by Owen Parish

In this tiny one-room game, you are the eternal guardian of the Gate, armed with a sword and appointed by the Ultimate. Behind the Gate is all of reality, the Ultimate itself, and the other intelligences. Out of the chaos, Harbinger approaches you and asks to be let inside. Which decision will you make?

IFDB | My walkthrough and map


In The End (1996) by Joe Mason

In this puzzleless story about suicide, you play as a moody man attending the funeral of your friend Jon. He wasn’t the type to ever give up and die, no matter how down he was. At least, you hadn’t thought so. Yet he chose his own time to go. With dignity. As he had a right to. Damn. You never were one for philosophy. Jon’s death must have affected you more than you thought.

This story was an entry in IF Comp 1996 where it took 15th place.

IFDB | My walkthrough and map


The job (2021) by Fredrik Ramsberg

In this small game, you borrowed money from Ricky, so now you have to do this job for him. You were searching the broom closet of The Red Anchor when someone pushed you over. Seems like Ricky left a note: “Return with the necklace, or don’t return!”

This game was an entry in PunyJam #1, but unplaced; the game was not voted on nor ranked.

IFDB | My walkthrough and map

Monday, 27. October 2025

Choice of Games LLC

Author Interview: Athar Fikry, “An Imp and an Impostor”

You’ve spent years undercover, disguised as a human, infiltrating the city’s magical law-enforcement organization. They stole your magic from you. Can you steal it back? An Imp and an Impostor is an interactive historical urban fantasy novel by Athar Fikry, author of The Dragon and the Djinn. I sat down with them to discuss their Egyptian background and how it informs their work. An Imp

An Imp and an ImpostorYou’ve spent years undercover, disguised as a human, infiltrating the city’s magical law-enforcement organization. They stole your magic from you. Can you steal it back? An Imp and an Impostor is an interactive historical urban fantasy novel by Athar Fikry, author of The Dragon and the Djinn. I sat down with them to discuss their Egyptian background and how it informs their work.

An Imp and an Impostor releases Wednesday, November 26th; you can wishlist it on Steam today—it really helps, even if you don’t intend to purchase it on that platform.

We published your first game The Dragon and the Djinn in 2022 and now we are thrilled to have a second game from you coming out next month. Tell me all about the setting of An Imp and an Impostor.
Thank you so much! I’m likewise thrilled to be back. An Imp and an Impostor is set in the coastal city of Raqout – which is one of many Raqouts! Our PC is actually from an alternate dimension version of it and they aren’t the only one, as this dimension’s Raqout wound up being a nexus for all sorts of creatures and beings and was half-drowned by a big old (benevolent?) eldritch entity not too long ago as a result.

Understandably, the city’s gotten a bit magic-shy, and so ended up with a branch of magical law enforcement called Arkan, just to handle that whole mess. Arkan is, of course, very competent and not at all corrupt, which is why our titular imp PC manages to infiltrate it so easily.

Raqout is also loosely based on my hometown of Alexandria as it was in the early 1900s, and contains a lot of my strongest visual impressions of it, especially the view of the crashing Mediterranean and the busy markets and gorgeous old buildings and villas. I haven’t been there in over a decade now, and much of the PC’s yearning for a home that’s just to the left of the one they’re in is very much mine, because I know that if and when I go back, it’ll be very different than the place I grew up in. There are references aplenty for those who know it, because I couldn’t help myself, and for those who don’t, I hope you enjoy your drives across the Corniche! Alexandria in the winter is really something.

Naturally, we have an Egyptian theme from our favorite Egyptian author.
Haha, yes! I couldn’t resist. I’m pretty sure all of my pitches this time were Egypt-centric, so thank you, CoG, for letting me write one! It’s not the Egypt most readers will be expecting, I imagine, even aside from this being a fantasy analogue. There are absolutely zero pharaohs involved, for one, beyond passing mention in the backdrop. No shade on pharaohs, it’s just that (and maybe this is a function of having had to study them for so many years at school) I find that period of Egyptian history one of the least interesting to me, personally. I much prefer the time period I’ve played around with in this game, where Egypt was stuck in between overlapping occupations, in the odd limbo between modernisation and tradition in a world rapidly changing around and within it, and grappling with what modernisation would look like given it so often came with foreign influence, simultaneously the land of “exotic” legend and opulence and also just…you know, a regular place where people lived.

So, yeah, no pharaohs, no ancient curses. Just a rainy seaside city with regular people (including imps and necromancers, yes, shush) suffering under corruption and forces too strong to fathom and sort of muddling through their day-to-day.

Oh, and also, SO many descriptions of food. Just so many.

What inspirations did you take from for the sort of magic in this game?
I’m sure it will come as no surprise to anyone who’s seen or read Fullmetal Alchemist that I count it as one of my foundational media. Fullmetal Alchemist has that effect on people. I will freely admit that the image of the talsam, the chalking of precise geometric shapes in a magic system that’s more scientific in feel, owes its origin to Fullmetal Alchemist’s transmutation circles. This combines with my absolute adoration for Arabic calligraphy and the way it can be used to create shapes and images, and how real life protective talismans here (or, well, you know, depends on how much you believe in that sort of thing, but for those who do) will often consist of specific words folded into pieces of paper and kept on one’s person, and here we are! That’s where talsama came from.

The imp’s own form of magic is inspired by weaving imagery, the idea of plucking at the threads of fate, and the fact I cannot visualise very well and so often like to reach for other senses to ground a scene—the concept of magic corresponding to taste and scent was just a very fun one, so I ran with it.

I feel like I also need to shout out Max Gladstone’s Craft Sequence for its particular flavour of bureaucratic magic, as well as the show Torchwood for inspiring the organisation of Arkan and…other things, but those would be spoilers.

What was your favorite part about returning to writing ChoiceScript?
In the small sense: The fact it’s SO EASY to code in such small variations into the text and be responsive to many small decisions. I played with Twine a bit in between games and oof, I really missed that ease and simplicity.

In the larger sense: having a game get away from me (again) (can you believe this was supposed to be a short one?) and yet still have all its disparate parts come together in the end, often in ways I didn’t expect going in. It always feels a little bit like having pulled off a magic trick, although I need to be clear in that it wouldn’t at all have been possible without the guidance and hard work of my editor, Rebecca, who is herself magic, I’m pretty sure.

How has your other work been going? I know you’ve been a contributor to a TTRPG.
I have, yes! Aside from the Emerald Templars TTRPG I mentioned last time, I’ve also made my own little things over on itch.io, including a solo-journaling game called SPITE about eating your stats to, well, spite your reflection. I really enjoy making bite-sized horror things and hope to make more. Everything on my itch is free to play, so please do check it out.

I also have a TTRPG setting book that had to be put on hold while I finished Imp and an Impostor, so if anyone here has been waiting for news on Marrowbreak, know that I’ll be going back to that soon!

As for non-TTRPG work, I have a few prose projects on the backburner that I look forward to returning to. I’m also an associate editor for Baffling Magazine and although I can’t talk about it yet, there’s some exciting stuff I’ll get to do with Baffling in the coming months!


Renga in Blue

Fairytale: Over the Moon

(Continued from my previous post.) “Toffee!” said every one in surprise, “What do you want toffee for?” “To eat, of course,” said Moon-Face. “I just thought if you had any toffee to give me I’d let you slide down my slippery-slip — you get down to the bottom very quickly that way, you know.” “A […]

(Continued from my previous post.)

“Toffee!” said every one in surprise, “What do you want toffee for?”

“To eat, of course,” said Moon-Face. “I just thought if you had any toffee to give me I’d let you slide down my slippery-slip — you get down to the bottom very quickly that way, you know.”

“A slide all the way down the Faraway Tree!” cried Jo, hardly believing his ears. “Good gracious! Whoever would have thought of that!”

“I thought of it!” said Moon-Face, beaming again just like a full moon. “I let people use it if they pay me toffee.”

— From The Enchanted Wood

The Folio Society version of The Enchanted Wood. That’s Moon-Face on the center bottom, a little less sinister-looking than in the original art.

Fairytale has the relatively unique condition of being not only a private game for family and friends, but one meant to be played under very particular conditions with groups; it only occurred to the author to publish later. This means that the author (who originally played Adventureland with his family) knew a reference to The Enchanted Forest would be understood and the puzzle of dealing with Moon-Face by using the exact moment from the book (see the top) was not only reasonable but a nice gesture at shared knowledge. As I already mentioned, I tried giving items to Moon-Face and he simply took each one (softlocking the game in the process) but my next step was to try every item available, and that included the candy items from outside the house (toffee, sugar barley, marzipan). So it was technically solvable but still unfortunate design; making it so giving the wrong item is a softlock combined with the book knowledge (pointed out by Matt W. in the comments) is certainly not polite.

To end on a compliment, I do find satisfying “cross-lore” type of puzzles, in this case where a piece of candy from Hansel and Gretel is used to satisfy a character from The Enchanted Wood. They’re both just stories, there’s no reason one can’t be a walk-on extra on the other.

Before plowing ahead with the next big obstacle I resolved, I should point out that one of the other items from candy-house (the marzipan) is special. If you just examine it while first encountering it the game just says “you see nothing special”, but if you examine it while the item is being held you find out it is really an emerald.

Just like how in Leopard Lord and in Crypt of Medea the mechanic that EXAMINE and SEARCH are treated differently is important to notice (and not something at all consistent between adventure games!), here, the fact you see something different when an item is being held vs. not-held is important (and again, not consistent between adventure games). The CRPG Addict recently had a post where he examined a set of standard things to look for in Ultima clones (how do secret doors work? do guards care if you steal things?) and it reminded me of that: while these adventure games are all “clones” in a sense, there are small important differences where it can be easy to be tripped up, and just like with Ultima clones you might go 5 games in a row where secret doors are either non-existent or “illusionary walls” but get tripped up by number 6 which goes back to a system where you have to hit the Search key in every suspicious tile.

By which I mean, I know I’ve played adventures where items have different results of EXAMINE when held and not-held, but it’s been a while.

Just to the east of candy-house is the empty chest: this is where the treasures go.

Once I had confirmed that GIVE ITEM really does help somewhere and doesn’t just swallow up all your inventory, I decided to try that with every inventory item on every other character. Fortunately the connections aren’t too obscure, although the first one I found was truly arbitrary.

Jo shook his head. “No, Saucepan isn’t mad. He’s just deaf. His saucepans make such a clanking all the time that the noise gets into his ears, and he can’t hear properly. So he keeps making mistakes.”

Saucepanman came from even before The Enchanted Wood, as he makes an appearance in The Book of Brownies from 1926. His main attribute is misunderstanding what people say (see above) and in Fairytale he’s on the lower level of the Faraway Tree, below Moon-Face.

He wants the oats. I just started handing over everything until I found the response above. HELP in the game (which I checked after solving the puzzle) just says that he “likes gifts”. I searched about the text and couldn’t find a connection with the character that made this work. I also searched about in adjacent rhymes/fairy tales but no luck, so I’m open to suggestions from the audience.

(The saucepan you can get from all this will be helpful later.)

Fortunately, my next discovery was a little less obtuse:

The witch wants the dead bat that was just lying around the forest. I admit I had this on my list to try before I started even rapid firing items. This opens up multiple things: a.) you can GO CAVE now while in this location; b.) you won’t get locked in the oven any more in the candy-house, so you can grab the silver key from within; c.) you can access the cauldron, although it is initially too hot and you have to take care of that first. We’ll tackle the items in that order, starting with the cave:

The book is an ad for either DRAGONQUEST ADVENTURE (if you’re playing the BBC version) or GOBLIN ADVENTURE (if you’re playing Stott’s Archimedes port). It just counts as a treasure, alas. The mortar and pestle get stored along with the saucepan for use later.

From the oven you can now grab the silver key…

…and then use it to unlock the hut to the southeast of the map, finding a grisly scene within.

I like the detail the axe is a “bloody” axe and remains that way for the rest of the game. Both get stored along with the saucepan and mortar/pestle, although I admit I haven’t found where the pliers get used yet.

The axe, on the other hand, I could use right away. To the west of the hut is an annoying prickly bush, so I immediately tried CHOP BUSH.

This opens a secret path over to a waterfall.

With the saucepan you can GET WATER while at the waterfall, then take it over to the cauldron and put it out. This lets you find some ancient bones within.

If you’re wondering about the varying inventory items, some of it is juggling to keep under the limit of 5, some of it is because I made multiple runs through the game trying to put everything together.

I made the discovery rather later (but I’ll disclose now) that you can be holding the mortar/pestle and bones and type GRIND BONES, getting “bone manure”.

The manure suggests some sort of planting-type use, so I’m going to jump over to another GIVE puzzle: the pedlar. I had him next on my list of “try GIVE on everything” people but quickly found the money (from the king in the palace and the pie) worked, and he handed over a ruby seed.

With ruby seed, garden trowel, bone manure, and some more water from the waterfall, it seems like I ought to be able to plant the seed. I even found the right place to do it: by the shed (with the spiders inside), where HELP says

Maybe the ground is too dry or infertile.

suggesting an optimal planting place. However, all my attempts at PLANT SEED or the like have failed; the game responds I can’t do that yet. I admit this might be a case where items X and Y need to be on the ground and A and B need to be held, in some confusing combination, but I haven’t tried all possibilities yet. I also may simply be using the wrong verb.

Rotating around the next character, the northeast corner has the castle with the sleeping girl at the spinning wheel. I realized even though I was actively thinking of Sleeping Beauty I hadn’t tried the Sleeping Beauty specific action:

I’m pretty sure the silver needle is just a treasure and that’s that; I can’t get anything from the spinning wheel. Given I haven’t finished the game yet anything is possible.

Finally we can rotate back to the Faraway Tree and the two “worlds” that you can visit by going UP from Moon-Face, the moon/bowl/spoon etc. scene and the palace. The choice of place is entirely a coin-flip and sometimes I went to the same place 6 or 7 times in a row (RNG strikes again); I could easily see someone simply not realizing there’s another destination there! (Maybe there’s a third place to go with some specific parameters?)

So with the scene above, I had observed you could nab nearly everything but the moon. What I hadn’t tried is simply taking the fiddle and playing it without picking up anything. The idea is to set up the whole Hey Diddle Diddle rhyme:

Hey diddle diddle,
The cat and the fiddle,
The cow jumped over the moon;
The little dog laughed
To see such sport,
And the dish ran away with the spoon.

I had played the fiddle but had already picked up the dish and spoon so they couldn’t do the “ran away” line, messing up the whole scenario. This idea of creating the conditions to re-enact the rhyme will come up again.

The whole purpose seems to be to get the “fiddle” to turn into a “Stratovarius” which is a treasure, but the cow might also be useful too.

Now on to the other destination:

I don’t have this fully worked out, but at least I got one of the really wild (in a game-design sense) parts. Let me give the entire relevant nursery rhyme, which I admit I had only partly remembered.

Sing a song of sixpence,
A pocket full of rye.
Four and twenty blackbirds
Baked in a pie.

When the pie was opened,
The birds began to sing.
Wasn’t that a dainty dish
To set before the king?

The king was in his counting house,
Counting out his money.
The queen was in the parlour,
Eating bread and honey.

The maid was in the garden,
Hanging out the clothes,
When down came a blackbird
And pecked off her nose.

I kept trying to do things with the pie at the king. I admit I still have had no luck. EAT PIE lets you just consume it, no birds. OPEN PIE just says the word “open” isn’t even recognized.

My suspicion is that the birds aren’t even in the pie yet and we’re supposed to put them there. If you recall from way back at the start you can see “blackbirds” in the tree, so somehow they combine with the pie? (I tried a bunch of verbs with the pie in the location, no dice.)

Even without that there’s a secret, though. The room just says you can go OUT, but if you study the rhyme, it mentions “The queen was in the parlour”. What parlour? Well, you can just GO PARLOUR and find it.

This is outrageous at a level I don’t have much comparison with; maybe the book references of Ring Quest where you could ask an elf (who wasn’t even visible in the room) for a ring, only guessing they have to be there and making a leap of faith.

You can’t take the bread or interact with the Queen (that I could find). You can take the honey but I don’t know where that is useful.

Oh, one last thing: back at the maid, you can look at the laundry to find an “ebony clothes pin” which counts as a treasure, and you have wet trousers left over. Not sure if they’re useful for anything.

King and blackbirds, from an 1877 Mother Goose collection.

To summarize:

  • I’m still likely missing some action in the palace/parlour akin to what happened with the fiddle, although maybe the whole purpose is to take the items. I still suspect you need to make a “scene” with the pie by somehow stuffing birds into it, but while you can see the birds from the top of the opening tree I don’t know where to get at them.
  • I still can’t plant the ruby seed, even though it seems like I have everything I need to do so. This may just be parser-struggle.
  • I haven’t done anything with: pliers, the spinning wheel, or some of the treasures (like the silver needle) although of course the treasures I haven’t “used” may simply be points.
  • It is possible I’m still missing a one-shot secret kind of treasure like the marzipan/emerald one unrelated to the larger puzzles. I am missing 3 treasures. The ruby seed counts as one, so I suspect after using it to grow a beanstalk (probably beanstalk, right?) it will be retrievable.

Given the need to know external references I’m happy to field any suggestions to try to get this to the end. Maybe there’s a nursery rhyme I blithely skipped over without realizing it?